The Moon, the Stars and Heaven, Too

Over the moon I threw a rope
to drag it down to give to thee.
This I did with a hope
that you would come to love me.

I pulled two stars from the skies
to give to you to show my love.
They paled compared to your eyes
and so I sent them back above.

For your love I would do
anything you asked of me.
If, my love, you only knew.
If, my love, you could see.

The stars, the moon and heaven, too.
There's nothing I would not give to you.





~~~~ form : English Sonnet ~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/28/2014 10:37:00 AM
Simple and sincere. Enjoyed. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:33:00 PM
A lovely devotional piece, full of longing and sweet emotion. Well constructed with splendid flow and rhyming. You're always here, so I can always find you. You are a talented poet. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/4/2012 11:25:00 PM
Shakespeare would be impressed with this write if he were alive today.
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Date: 4/4/2012 7:40:00 AM
You are so very talented Francine, such lovely astral imagery to contemplate!
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Date: 4/4/2012 6:25:00 AM
So very beautiful and sentimental Francine
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:07:00 PM
Using one of the words I used when I did the 80's contest: this is SCHWEET!!!! very romantic, Francine.
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