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The Moon Shines

The moon shines on the ocean, brnging about changes of when things will come about, good or bad With memories, of all I had I want to dance along the beach, dreaming of all that I can reach I can hear the waves curl onto shore There isn't much that I want more The Moon guides me, along the sand Giving answers, I understand I rise with the tide and I smile The Moon Shines with me all the while Heidi Sands 8/4/24 *8 Syllables (C)opyright

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Date: 9/4/2024 9:29:00 AM
This is a great poem that is studded with such beautiful imagery and great rhyme. Totally appreciated it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/4/2024 3:01:00 PM
Thank you! I am so happy you like it. I appreciate the positive feedback :)
Date: 8/6/2024 6:49:00 PM
If I didn't know better, I'd guess that you've been imbibing a little of that 'moonshine,' Heidi. lol. Beautiful poem! ~ Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2024 7:11:00 PM
Lol. Thank you Gershon. :)
Date: 8/4/2024 9:50:00 PM
It never ceases to fascinate me Heidi, through a telescope it looks amazing. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2024 9:59:00 PM
I agree Tom. Yes a telescope ..amazing. I am ok. Thank you :)

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