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Head twitching, black eye gleaming, reflecting moonlight, He dreams of hoarding that great shiny orb. Tucking it in with his precious treasures inside the Rowan tree to feast his eyes upon... his alone. Perhaps he will take a small bite so his charcoal feathers shoot out indigo moon beams and all the creatures will gaze at him in admiration as they do the night sky. He tucks his beak under a wing, and turns a quick circle, his way of smiling with excitement. Then noticing movement under his perch, he stills, one marble eye to the ground. A lone wolf lurks, turning circles before standing to gaze at the full moon, so large in the speckled night sky. All of the night sounds seem to quiet, recognizing the predator scent, old coppery blood and sinew, on the wind. He does not like the way the wolf is looking at his moon. He hops once on his branch and lets loose an angry, "caw!", to warn the wolf away. Spreading his long sleek wings to show the wolf how big and frightening he is, he once again yells,"mine!" The unaffected wolf lazily turns only his eyes upward to the exuberant crow, not stirring another muscle. Crows are such childish thieves, he thinks, everyone knows the moon belongs to me.

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Date: 2/26/2025 8:15:00 AM
GREAT. Really enjoyed. I am thinking how to compose on my idea.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/27/2025 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Anisha! Good luck and happy writing! Xo
Date: 2/25/2025 9:21:00 AM
What a creative write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one... Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/25/2025 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Paula! Xo
Date: 2/25/2025 5:04:00 AM
Dear Crystol, Pure magic! Your words took me on a journey with such great imagery, into that world, where the crow’s pride and the wolf’s indifference create such a fascinating dynamic. You certainly captured the beauty of nature, ego, and a little playful rivalry. Love it! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/25/2025 9:55:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed the story Daniel, thank you for visiting! Xo
Date: 2/24/2025 5:15:00 PM
Covetousness and misunderstanding the greater evil. Bathsheba and David....
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Arlo Parker
Date: 2/25/2025 10:44:00 AM
Amen....!!!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/25/2025 10:01:00 AM
I had a few undefined morals in mind as I wrote but I believe my main objective here was to show the audacity of man to believe we can own any part of this earth God gave us. It is not ours to own but to cultivate for his glory.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/25/2025 9:56:00 AM
Nice interpretation Arlo! I love how many there can be. Xoxo
Date: 2/24/2025 1:37:00 PM
I love it like Tommy does. Great example for your contest. Hope I can think one up myself.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/25/2025 9:57:00 AM
Thanks so much! I'm really excited to read all of the entries, and know you'll do something amazing as usual! Xo
Date: 2/24/2025 12:13:00 PM
I love it! Okay what I'm getting is God's creation is there for all of us to share and bask in, small creatures as well as great, including man. You always surprise me in a good way. Soupmail
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/24/2025 12:25:00 PM
Thank you! I love your interpretation! Xo

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