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The Moon in the Rowan Tree




Head twitching, black eye gleaming, reflecting moonlight, He dreams of hoarding that great shiny orb. Tucking it in with his precious treasures inside the Rowan tree to feast his eyes upon... his alone. Perhaps he will take a small bite so his charcoal feathers shoot out indigo moon beams and all the creatures will gaze at him in admiration as they do the night sky. He tucks his beak under a wing, and turns a quick circle, his way of smiling with excitement. Then noticing movement under his perch, he stills, one marble eye to the ground. A lone wolf lurks, turning circles before standing to gaze at the full moon, so large in the speckled night sky. All of the night sounds seem to quiet, recognizing the predator scent, old coppery blood and sinew, on the wind. He does not like the way the wolf is looking at his moon. He hops once on his branch and lets loose an angry, "caw!", to warn the wolf away. Spreading his long sleek wings to show the wolf how big and frightening he is, he once again yells,"mine!" The unaffected wolf lazily turns only his eyes upward to the exuberant crow, not stirring another muscle. Crows are such childish thieves, he thinks, everyone knows the moon belongs to me.
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Dutta Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 8:15 AM
GREAT. Really enjoyed. I am thinking how to compose on my idea.
Woods Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Thank you Anisha! Good luck and happy writing! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:21 AM
What a creative write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Woods Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:54 AM
Thanks Paula! Xo
Rodgers Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 5:04 AM
Dear Crystol, Pure magic! Your words took me on a journey with such great imagery, into that world, where the crow’s pride and the wolf’s indifference create such a fascinating dynamic. You certainly captured the beauty of nature, ego, and a little playful rivalry. Love it! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:55 AM
So glad you enjoyed the story Daniel, thank you for visiting! Xo
Parker Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 5:15 PM
Covetousness and misunderstanding the greater evil. Bathsheba and David....
Parker Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Amen....!!!
Woods Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 10:01 AM
I had a few undefined morals in mind as I wrote but I believe my main objective here was to show the audacity of man to believe we can own any part of this earth God gave us. It is not ours to own but to cultivate for his glory.
Woods Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Nice interpretation Arlo! I love how many there can be. Xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 1:37 PM
I love it like Tommy does. Great example for your contest. Hope I can think one up myself.
Woods Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:57 AM
Thanks so much! I'm really excited to read all of the entries, and know you'll do something amazing as usual! Xo
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