Paulette Calasibetta Poet Quintilla

The Moon In June

the face of the first full moon shines,
                                reflecting lush and fertile fields,
                            where nature’s sweet abundance yields
                            strawberries sprawling on trailing vines;
                                     for aromatic berry wines.








Date: June 6, 2022
For: The Moon in June Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
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Rhymes Rhyme scheme: a/b/b/a/a
Rhymes verified on rhymezone.com
Placed 2nd in contest

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Paula Goldsmith June 14, 2022 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" Quintilla write. Have a blessed day with your win...........

Sam Kauffman June 13, 2022 at 9:24 AM Oh Paulette! This is as lovely, and tranquil, as "sprawling" berry vines in the moonlight. A beautiful moonlit scene. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! Paulette Calasibetta June 13, 2022 at 10:05 AM Hi Sam, glad you enjoyed it.....June is the most delightful month with the Strawberry Moon appearing on the 14th and the vines lush with fruit. :)Paulette

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2022 at 11:38 PM this is a wonderful quintella you created for my contest, Paulette. Congrats on your splendid win, Paulette Calasibetta June 13, 2022 at 7:35 AM Thank you Andrea~I am honored to have taken the 2nd place ment but I assure you I will still try for a 1st! LOL. :)Paulette

Beryl Edmonds June 9, 2022 at 11:56 PM A beautiful Quintilla for the moon in June Paulette and as for strawberry wine it sounds divine… Blessings, Belle Paulette Calasibetta June 13, 2022 at 7:35 AM Thank you Belle~very sweet! :)Paulette

Gordon Mcconnell June 9, 2022 at 12:14 PM A lovely piece Paulette, such nice imagery and nice piece of brevity. Blessings always,Gordon Paulette Calasibetta June 9, 2022 at 12:55 PM Thank you Gordon~glad you enjoyed it. Blessings,Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose June 8, 2022 at 9:22 AM OOH I love the scent of that Paulette, I miss you last week, hope all is well, love and peace, Vie Paulette Calasibetta June 9, 2022 at 7:05 AM Hi Vie, Glad you enjoyed the “scent” of my poem~as you know I have a penchant for the moon….hence I love to write about it. XO P

Mike Gentile June 8, 2022 at 5:18 AM Paulette, the spectacular beauty of nature shines brightly in your beautiful poem! A gem this is! Happy Wednesday xxoo Paulette Calasibetta June 9, 2022 at 7:03 AM Hi Mike, thanks for stopping by to gaze at the wonders of the moon….glad you liked it. :)Paulette

Brandy Nicole June 7, 2022 at 9:53 AM Through your words delicate and divine, I can almost taste those delicious strawberries on the vine. You have captured the moment so beautifully, my dear friend. The Moon in June leaves me in complete awe, and your thoughts are breathtaking. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Paulette Calasibetta June 7, 2022 at 1:09 PM Brandy, thank you so much, I am glad I was able to bring the reality of the “Moon in June” to you. Thank you stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Bill Baker June 6, 2022 at 3:09 PM Lovely entry for the contest, Paulette. Good luck! Bill Paulette Calasibetta June 6, 2022 at 4:34 PM Thank you for stopping by once again, to comment on my poems. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Panagiota Romios June 6, 2022 at 11:18 AM What a unique poem, from start to finish., PauletteL ~ Panagiota~ Paulette Calasibetta June 6, 2022 at 4:35 PM Panagiota glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu June 6, 2022 at 11:02 AM Helllo Paulette, strawberry wine !I never had strawberry wine. Did you? Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu June 7, 2022 at 4:50 AM Hello Paulette, yes i agree strawberry wine would be betterer on ice cream. Hugs. Enjoy your day. Paulette Calasibetta June 6, 2022 at 4:36 PM Thanks for stopping by to comment, Darlene~Strawberry wine is quite sweet, it is not a favorite of mine but it has a lovely aroma and I think it would be perfect drizzled over vanilla ice cream. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar June 6, 2022 at 9:08 AM Perfect in every sense. Best for a win. Yo deserve it. Paulette Calasibetta June 6, 2022 at 9:25 AM Thank you Victor. Hope you have a nice day. :)Paulette