Constance La France Poet Quatrain

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The Moon and Seven Sisters

 
When the waning moon casts its umber shadow on the earth,
During a supermoon eclipse all the skywatchers quietly gather;
A double spectacle of a gigantic swollen moon bathed in blood red,
And light creeping the edges of earth to create seven blue sisters.


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September 28, 2015

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For the contest, Supermoon Eclipse, sponsor, Eve Roper

First Place

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Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2015 at 1:03 PM I love your unique approach here, Constance. I did not know about these blue sisters. Congrats on the win, dear.

Skat A October 9, 2015 at 12:25 AM Broken, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2015 at 3:29 PM Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 8, 2015 at 2:33 AM Another wonderful write n win Broken ! Congrats on superb win!

Balveen Cheema October 7, 2015 at 8:06 PM So so beautiful! Congrats on your win Wings!

Eve Roper October 7, 2015 at 2:25 PM Broken Wing, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

Jan Allison October 7, 2015 at 2:22 PM Many congratulations on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak October 7, 2015 at 1:34 PM Nicely done. You eclipsed us with this poem. Congrats!

James Inman October 4, 2015 at 10:24 AM Lovely poem, BW

Robert Lindley September 29, 2015 at 5:56 PM A brilliant entry in that contest. Definitely a super 7 . Good luck and it already rates tops with me..

Michael Tor September 29, 2015 at 12:57 AM Very nice Broken Wings. Enjoyed your choice of words.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2015 at 1:38 PM - Yes, I find no better words than already been written: Beautiful !!!! - I wish you good luck in the contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miraj Raha September 28, 2015 at 12:44 PM Beautiful,an excellent capture.I always love moon poetry.

Anna Hopper September 28, 2015 at 12:31 PM This is beautiful! You have such a way with words. Your word choice is always so lovely and elegant. Flowing from the tongue. There seems to be a bit of magic in your poetry as well! A 7!

Sneha Rv September 28, 2015 at 11:55 AM This is so wonderful!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D