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The Moon and Seven Sisters

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When the waning moon casts its umber shadow on the earth, During a supermoon eclipse all the skywatchers quietly gather; A double spectacle of a gigantic swollen moon bathed in blood red, And light creeping the edges of earth to create seven blue sisters. _______________________________ September 28, 2015 Quatrain For the contest, Supermoon Eclipse, sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/10/2015 1:03:00 PM
I love your unique approach here, Constance. I did not know about these blue sisters. Congrats on the win, dear.
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Date: 10/9/2015 12:25:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2015 3:29:00 PM
Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/8/2015 2:33:00 AM
Another wonderful write n win Broken ! Congrats on superb win!
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Date: 10/7/2015 8:06:00 PM
So so beautiful! Congrats on your win Wings!
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Date: 10/7/2015 2:25:00 PM
Broken Wing, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve
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Date: 10/7/2015 2:22:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2015 1:34:00 PM
Nicely done. You eclipsed us with this poem. Congrats!
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Date: 10/4/2015 10:24:00 AM
Lovely poem, BW
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Date: 9/29/2015 5:56:00 PM
A brilliant entry in that contest. Definitely a super 7 . Good luck and it already rates tops with me..
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:57:00 AM
Very nice Broken Wings. Enjoyed your choice of words.
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Date: 9/28/2015 1:38:00 PM
- Yes, I find no better words than already been written: Beautiful !!!! - I wish you good luck in the contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:44:00 PM
Beautiful,an excellent capture.I always love moon poetry.
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:31:00 PM
This is beautiful! You have such a way with words. Your word choice is always so lovely and elegant. Flowing from the tongue. There seems to be a bit of magic in your poetry as well! A 7!
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:55:00 AM
This is so wonderful!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
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