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The Moon

like rambunctious boys at play clouds drift across the moon masking its face in mystery light given and then gone to soon this fitful little summer storm playing ticks whilst lovers swoon we know it can not hide for long our secret charm, the summer moon
4/8/13

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Date: 4/12/2013 11:33:00 AM
this is brief but accurate write... Good~A.O
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Date: 4/8/2013 4:17:00 PM
Very well described short summer storm indeed....
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Date: 4/8/2013 7:56:00 AM
I love me some summer moons! I like the atmosphere created here. Very well done! :)
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Date: 4/8/2013 7:24:00 AM
- A very good poem to the contest, good luck - hope you get high up on the winning list! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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