The Moon

like rambunctious boys at play clouds drift across the moon masking its face in mystery light given and then gone to soon this fitful little summer storm playing ticks whilst lovers swoon we know it can not hide for long our secret charm, the summer moon
4/8/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 11:33 AM
this is brief but accurate write... Good~A.O
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 4:17 PM
Very well described short summer storm indeed....
Tacito Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 7:56 AM
I love me some summer moons! I like the atmosphere created here. Very well done! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 7:24 AM
- A very good poem to the contest, good luck - hope you get high up on the winning list! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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