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The Moon

The moon I was told is my uncle, from days when I was in the cradle, they showed me the moon to make me eat, other distractions like birds that tweet. So grew up to believe moon was male, one day brighter another day pale, I even drew moustache on his face, and manly spectacles on his gaze. Many stories told under his rays, cuddling to granny in good old days, how he would watch over us every night, except nights when he was out of sight! When in love we looked up to the Moon, his waxing, waning kept us in tune, he lit our hearts with romantic thoughts, we loved his smile, mysterious spots. Poets many have changed Moon’s sex at will, to suit situations and their quill, from Arabs to Greeks he, she or it, my Uncle moon doesn’t care a bit! He continues to glow, reflect Sun, and he takes a bow when its all done, generations have been and perished, Moon will always be loved and cherished! To confirm my beliefs, asked my friend, clever school teacher from the street end, He said I was right, to prove it soon, he showed me picture of Ban ki-Moon!
Premier contest winner (6) Written 6/Aug/2021 is the Moon male or female or both poetry contest Chantelle Anne Cooke sponsored 9 syllables each line!

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Date: 8/11/2021 1:35:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/11/2021 3:28:00 AM
Beata, Thanks! My kindest regards and Good wishes!
Date: 8/10/2021 12:28:00 PM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write about your uncle the moon. Love your line "my Uncle moon doesn’t care a bit!" Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/10/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thanks Paula! happy to have your lovely words.:) God bless!
Date: 8/10/2021 10:26:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/10/2021 10:45:00 AM
Thanks My friend! appreciate your kind words!:)
Date: 8/6/2021 5:31:00 AM
Lol, love the twist at the end, hope you're keeping well. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/6/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Tom! I am good. Yes, plan to get away for the weekend. Hope you are well!

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