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The Mood of Her

How delicious, the mood of her.... how dear she soothes what I cannot reach ---- Fills that big-old-hole below in the depths of my soul, each time sweeter things.... And soft lips searching, my long reach, with her mere whim she touches tender doubt, And makes me believe, that love is swift and enduring, She is 'longer' and more lovely each day, reaching delicious, the mood of her.... (how dear she soothes)

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Catherine Trout

Date: 5/28/2014 9:27:00 PM

The doubter whom believes ~ Such sweet words. Enjoyed this write! Thank you~Catfish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2014 9:18:00 PM

A beautiful look into your words. You have such heart, when it comes to writing. I like how you decided to call her mood delicious.. You gave the imagery a tasteful longing reach.... xox ~ Linda

Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/21/2014 8:19:00 PM

I tip my hat to you Keith. It took many years to even get to your level. It took a strong loving woman to bring it out of me. Great write.

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/22/2014 8:34:00 AM

Very kind of you to say Larry! Yes women are such a cherish to me (in a good way) and teach me all the time; The Master of Love is the student at all times....

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2014 6:23:00 PM

How intriguing this mood of her's must be to the one who writes about it,and how beautiful for us to read and feel the transmitted emotion through your verse.

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/22/2014 8:36:00 AM

For your eyes only Charmaine..... Love returns to love