Ravindra K Kapoor Poet Free verse

The Mood 1/2

The Mood					1/2

I want to adore you, O, Mood today
Without you, we find it difficult to write any thing
Even it is difficult to dream or imagine anything

Without You O Mood,
We neither can appreciate the beauty of a blooming Rose
Nor we can enjoy its enchanting fragrance

Without You O Mood,
It is difficult to enjoy and feel, even a heart touching melody
Flowing like a breeze, in the air all around us

Without You O Mood,
We even can not feel the beauty in its alluring form
When women open its charms and want to take every thing in arms

Without You O Mood
We can not be enthralled to dance in the season of spring
When others feeling its charms, are singing joyous songs

Without You O Mood,
We can not feel young, even after drinking nectar
To enjoy the blessings of youth and to replay the Evergreen tree Song

					
Ravindra 					to be concluded in 2/2

Kanpur India. 7th April 2010

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Susan Mills May 18, 2010 at 1:34 PM A mood is so lovely to me when its not extreme. Thank you for bringing Mood to animated life so eloquently. I appreciate mine more today-- Grateful for the simple beauty of the breeze. Susan

Skat A May 5, 2010 at 9:13 PM INTERESTING ONE, most enjoyed. You have such a way with your write. Perfectly written, and well posted. With a read so interesting. Ravindra, thank you for your kind comment,,IRMA

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2010 at 7:32 PM Mood is very necessary when creating a write ... I look for atmosphere.. that is what I write as my inspiration from people, from luv, from children, from life ... anxious for part 2 of Mood...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards April 7, 2010 at 4:05 PM Once again...this is truly beautiful Ravindra. I cannot wait to read the conclusion...wonderful poetry! ~ Love, Carrie

April 7, 2010 at 11:56 AM The repetition works well to make your point in this poem. What a creative perspective. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2010 at 10:16 AM Your "mood" allows you to feel everything good that life has to offer, Ravindra. You give us wonderful images and the form of this poem is quite creative. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Love, Carolyn