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The Monster and Me

My cold and starving family Wait now in our well hidden post Fearing the worst for me I know While I pursue what we need most Breathing heavy I dart around Keeping all directions in check Sustenance may bare a stiff price If the monster should grab my neck! Look there! That is quite a morsel The monster's so close what a pity But then I knew, I would get through When the big voice said, "Here kitty!" I grab the morsel and off I run Not stopping 'til I'm in our house Once again my family is fed And that's not too bad for a mouse!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/16/2020 11:44:00 PM
Look there! That is quite a morsel/ The monster's so close what a pity/ But then I knew, I would get through/ When the big voice said, "Here kitty!"///excellently expressed; beautiful poem penned
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/17/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Mahtab, I appreciate that!......pat
Date: 1/16/2020 5:42:00 AM
Had me thinking all the way, good write
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 3:49:00 PM
Thanks (again) Lewis!.............80)
Date: 12/18/2017 11:09:00 PM
Awww. How adorable! Had me guessing til the end. Great job!
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Pat Adams
Date: 12/19/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Rhoda........pat
Date: 12/18/2017 9:20:00 PM
Giggles galore :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 12/19/2017 9:38:00 AM
Aw.....I always appreciate your input Mo.......80).....p
Date: 12/18/2017 8:31:00 PM
great little write Pat, didn't see that ending coming at all.
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Pat Adams
Date: 12/19/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Lewis!..........80)......pat
Date: 12/18/2017 8:27:00 PM
Lol, Glad it was a kitty and not a lion Pat!…Very imaginative!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 12/19/2017 9:36:00 AM
Well, I guess a kitty is a lion to a mouse, huh???...;O)..pat

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