The Monster

I stood there transfixed
in a corner atop a chair
quivering with bulging eyes,
Tears and sweat flowing in rivulets
A lump in my throat
Parched lips and ashen face;
Was it a nightmare I wondered
Or an enormous ogre I see?

Things are not what they appear, they say.

But I swear, standing in front of me 
baring its teeth in a sinister grin
was a frightening sight I see
crouching and its claws ready to strike--
God, I knew then, my end was at hand!
An icy shiver shuddered through me.

I shrieked for help but nary a sound
I tried to run but nary a stir…
When the door flew open and
my 3 year old granddaughter walked in…

Ha, there you are! 
I’ve been looking all over for you, sweetie pie…

...and bent down
to gently pick her pet mouse!


~"Fear" contest by The Seeker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 11:10 PM
A great write, Abdul, with an adorable ending! Some phobias bring such terror but almost seem silly. You described this so well. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:24 PM
Oh Abdul what a GREAT ending!! So cute. Congrats on the win.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Ha Ha Ha...well phobia does not give us a choice even if ti is a small mouse! Congrats. :)
Krampe Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Like the humor in your poem, Abdul. Congrats on your placement.
Vinson Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Nice, Abdul, good use of perspective. I can imagine those huge human hands....
Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Great write Abdul, had me going from start to humorous ending. Congrats on a fine placement!
Mandani Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 5:34 PM
Thanks John. You did pretty good.
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 12:15 PM
ha ha ha sure sounds scary made me giggle good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Mandani Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Man, mice scare the heck out of me--they are bad, bad wolves! lol. Thanks Jan.
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