The Moment

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The appointed time awaits everyone.......

I dreamed about the moment When I bowed before the King That's when an angel asked me 'Son, what gifts do you bring I said, all I have to offer Is my heart.... in my hands And this blood stained ticket To the Promised Land Protected by copyright All rights reserved

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/26/2018 4:21:00 PM

And your offering has more worth than a trillion tons of gold and billion false praises uttered by pretenders that attend church services as if they are social or business club affairs my very talented friend! A fav.. this short poem has massive power in its bright Light and its gleaming Truth!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/18/2018 11:12:00 AM

Soulful offerings, Chuck, both your gifts and this beautifully expressed, heavenly poem. Simply superb! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Fj Thomas

Date: 7/9/2018 1:47:00 PM

A hard journey for most. Very soulful Chuck :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2018 10:10:00 AM

This warrants another read. Well and emotively expressed.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/4/2018 9:32:00 AM

Hi Chuck, loved the content. The moment comes for us all. Wonderful write my friend. Sing on Chuck. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend....Mike.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/30/2018 6:27:00 AM