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The appointed time awaits everyone.......

I dreamed about the moment
When I bowed before the King
That's when an angel asked me
'Son, what gifts do you bring

I said, all I have to offer
Is my heart.... in my hands
And this blood stained ticket
To the Promised Land




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Date: 7/26/2018 4:21:00 PM
And your offering has more worth than a trillion tons of gold and billion false praises uttered by pretenders that attend church services as if they are social or business club affairs my very talented friend! A fav.. this short poem has massive power in its bright Light and its gleaming Truth!
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Date: 7/18/2018 11:12:00 AM
Soulful offerings, Chuck, both your gifts and this beautifully expressed, heavenly poem. Simply superb! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:47:00 PM
A hard journey for most. Very soulful Chuck :)
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Date: 7/8/2018 10:10:00 AM
This warrants another read. Well and emotively expressed.
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Date: 7/4/2018 9:32:00 AM
Hi Chuck, loved the content. The moment comes for us all. Wonderful write my friend. Sing on Chuck. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend....Mike.
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/30/2018 6:27:00 AM
Mike...Hope thanks and appreciation are yours!
Date: 7/3/2018 8:44:00 AM
It sounds like the perfect moment. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/30/2018 6:26:00 AM
My thanks Richard!
Date: 6/27/2018 3:09:00 AM
In the end that's all we have to offer. Well penned, Chuck. T.J
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 6/27/2018 6:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Teppo!
Date: 6/26/2018 8:42:00 AM
Excellent ink!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 6/27/2018 6:38:00 AM
A big thank you MM.
Date: 6/25/2018 9:56:00 PM
It's coming.. be ready!!!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 6/27/2018 6:38:00 AM
Many Ty's Lyric man! Gonna mosy over 2 your site.