Chuck Melugin Poet Rhyme

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The appointed time awaits everyone.......

The Moment

I dreamed about the moment
When I bowed before the King
That's when an angel asked me
'Son, what gifts do you bring

I said, all I have to offer
Is my heart.... in my hands
And this blood stained ticket
To the Promised Land




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Robert Lindley July 26, 2018 at 4:21 PM And your offering has more worth than a trillion tons of gold and billion false praises uttered by pretenders that attend church services as if they are social or business club affairs my very talented friend! A fav.. this short poem has massive power in its bright Light and its gleaming Truth!

Susan Ashley July 18, 2018 at 11:12 AM Soulful offerings, Chuck, both your gifts and this beautifully expressed, heavenly poem. Simply superb! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

FJ Thomas July 9, 2018 at 1:47 PM A hard journey for most. Very soulful Chuck :)

Richard Lamoureux July 8, 2018 at 10:10 AM This warrants another read. Well and emotively expressed.

Vladislav Raven July 4, 2018 at 9:32 AM Hi Chuck, loved the content. The moment comes for us all. Wonderful write my friend. Sing on Chuck. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend....Mike. Chuck Melugin July 30, 2018 at 6:27 AM Mike...Hope thanks and appreciation are yours!

Richard Lamoureux July 3, 2018 at 8:44 AM It sounds like the perfect moment. Thanks for your visit and comment. Chuck Melugin July 30, 2018 at 6:26 AM My thanks Richard!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 26, 2018 at 8:42 AM Excellent ink! Chuck Melugin June 27, 2018 at 6:38 AM A big thank you MM.

Lyric Man June 25, 2018 at 9:56 PM It's coming.. be ready!!! Chuck Melugin June 27, 2018 at 6:38 AM Many Ty's Lyric man! Gonna mosy over 2 your site.