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The Moebious Bird

swirling ascent, streaming, feathered, winging -- 'look at your tops, they are my bottoms,' she tweets 'n twitters, murmurs me:me surging urges in the air she soars everywhere a falling feeling -- a free-spirit flows through her wings, a sapient sixth sense for rising up to close the gap -- caresses curious circuits, twirling, swooning, reeling, drifting through heightened meaning -- she speaks in many tongues, larking on the edge of a hush with the rush of a far-cry, a longing songing sigh -- in a fluttering, floating glide, she rounds in passions now arrived, now along, swooping, looping, going, going, falling fast, now turned, re-turned, now gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 5:10:00 PM
A master's eye described that flight and set my mind winging to loops of beauty.
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:30:00 PM
Play the guitar before 100 thousand children... This is beautiful lyric.
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Date: 4/16/2009 11:55:00 AM
Have you read any of Gertrude Stein? This has a strong flavour of her writings. I think she is 'out of fashion' now and she wasn't much thought of in her day. I like her work (especially the operas she wrote for Virgil Thompson). I wouldn't say there is genius in this style but there is a lot of inventiveness and I think it provides an endless scope (rather as Cummings does) for novelty. This is a lovely piece that has a cross-generational appeal to it.
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