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The Mockingbird

Day 1: It’s early and I need my fix, berries or seed I will fly next door but must watch for the monster He is fluffy and orange and has claws, he tried to chase me I will mock him, make all kinds of sounds, to scare him away There he is, I land on his house roof and start singing A doorbell sound, a siren, a screech, has he left yet? I see a flash of orange run into the house, I won, ha ha! I fly to the birdseed, whoa, I stop, there is a huge Blue Jay I am beyond irritated, I squawk, dance and make a scene Day 2: The sweet lady comes out every morning with a huge beast He tried to chase me one morning at the feeder, he is quick I flew to safety, to the lilac bushes and hid in the bird house I need to try again, there is so much free food, is it a trap? I fly over even earlier to feed but there is another monster He is black and white and stalks me, maybe I can attack him? I decide to keep searching, I see another house I can try I need to find new sounds to use for my feeding strategy Alas, sweet berry suet, I rejoice with my many melodies! 7/13/19 Title chosen: The Mockingbird Contest: Pick A Title, Vol 6- Personification Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 7/20/2019 7:24:00 PM
Congratulations. I can see him jumping around cautiously, on tilt
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/21/2019 5:00:00 AM
Thank you Georgia!
Date: 7/20/2019 11:29:00 AM
A sweet poem! Congrats on your win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/21/2019 5:00:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne!
Date: 7/20/2019 11:26:00 AM
Wonderful personification, Tania, congrats on your win. John
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/20/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you John!
Date: 7/20/2019 11:08:00 AM
Two days in the life of a wondrous bird! What a terrific poem, Tania:-) Congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/20/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Edward for your nice comments and my awesome placement! :)
Date: 7/14/2019 8:21:00 AM
Quite the adventure. Good luck in the contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/14/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Rick! :)
Date: 7/13/2019 6:48:00 AM
Complications one of the other...Life itself...might as well mock it...as long as you get the food...What a mocking bird you would make...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/13/2019 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Arturo!
Date: 7/13/2019 6:18:00 AM
That buffet is so tempting! Nice personification!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/13/2019 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim!

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