The Missing Link

As I reflect what do I remember? 
A random meeting in November 
when our lives collided. 

As we began our story 
the plot was heady, physical, 
but our spirits never met. 

They never did - in all that time, 
they never did, did they? 
We lived in a shallow pool; 

spirits strangers still; 
our souls still separate entities, 
while the physical became the focus. 

I tried to introduce us, me and mine, 
but yours was always busy. 
Otherwise engaged; on the phone, 

at work, or under the sea, 
and that left me lonely, 
solitary, calling but never heard. 

Just one word of tenderness from you 
would have changed it, but 
it never came. 

In all that time it never came - 
did it? And here we are; 
not only separate souls, 

but separate bodies too, 
and you feel hurt, wounded. 
Why?  Just one word of tenderness 

could have changed it, 
but it never came - 
did it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/21/2009 4:25:00 AM
Wonderfully done..lost love and the emotion of it all captured well in this piece. Great job!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2009 11:53:00 PM
An excellent opening verse... setting the scene for a poignant tale of lost love. Well done Helen! Best wishes, Keith
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad