The Mirror

Oh! How it must have looked back then
How you looked oh so small
As you gazed into your future
In that mirror on the wall
Family is as family does
And God knows that we need 'em
But that image in the glass ahead
Is the doorway to your freedom

Like old worn boots, you walked that path
With a voice like liquid gravel
The easy way, was not your way
You chose the road less travelled
It's hard at times to stare into
A face that's done you wrong
But that Silver Tongued Devil, sometimes
Sold your Soul out, for a song

The image misted over
'Til there was no you, no more
The dust, it lay down heavy
On that Mirror, on the wall
Though at times you felt forsaken
In your vision of tomorrow
Your faith remained, unbroken
You proved stronger than your sorrow

The Shadows, in the darkness
Lead you closer to the fall
Your distance from the Mirror
made your Heroes, seem so tall
We watched you from a distance
As you seen your image clear
And small we stood, yet plentiful
We held your vision dear

At last we see your happiness
A Soul without a blemish
No more a time of emptiness
Content, in your own image
Your life, a Golden Spiral
Equal in its distortion
An Infinite Holy Wonder
In its own Divine Proportion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/16/2016 10:07:00 AM
It's beautiful Peter!
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Date: 1/15/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Rich...I wrote this the week of his 79th birthday as I am a lifelong fan...I know a little of his son Jesse from Facebook and pointed the poem in his direction....like the obliging kid he is he sent it on to his mom, Lisa, Kris wife and she gave it to him to read on the morn of his birthday...Jesse sent me a copy of the text he received from his mom in regard to the poem and it went something like...Thanks for the poem, Jesse, it made your dad puff up with pride...I was truly pleased ...lol Hope you're well haven't been on awhile...you know life and stuff...lol
Date: 3/29/2016 12:22:00 PM
A TRIBUTE TO KRIS KRISTOFFERSON
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