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The Mirror

My bedroom mirror suddenly broke open tonight I stared at it aghast; it spilled all my past Images rolled on- how I fought with my young sister In our childhood; how I hated her for being my parents’ darling A dilapidated doll, its head severed The incessant teardrops of her- how I felt an inner elation Images again; I grabbed the innocent lover-boy by his neck Fists and punches – his blood-stained stare I liked it, because he dared to love my teenaged sister I was in my teens too, and secretly made passes at some of her friends But my sister having a boyfriend- that was different A slashed wrist, a gaping face; two writhing bodies of my parents A prosaic funeral, a teenage girl laid inside the ground Has she ever found peace? I am not sure Being her brother I must have done the right thing 31.08.2014

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Date: 9/9/2014 7:16:00 AM
your images make me reel.. sweet congrats!
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 9/9/2014 9:54:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 9/7/2014 1:18:00 PM
Wow! This one is a heart cut wide open. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 9/8/2014 8:17:00 AM
Thank you a lot for the encouraging comment
Date: 9/7/2014 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This is a powerful piece. :-)Christine
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 9/8/2014 8:17:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 9/7/2014 5:32:00 AM
Amazing write Prasenjit! Sad n heartfelt ,, very well penned! Congrats on ur win!
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 9/8/2014 8:16:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Dr. Sharma.
Date: 9/6/2014 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 9/7/2014 2:27:00 AM
Thanks, Dear friend, it's an inspiration to go on writing
Date: 9/6/2014 5:15:00 PM
this one really grabbed me, that first line pulled me straight into the poem; emotionally honest and disturbing, a truly confessional piece - congrats on your win in my contest
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 9/7/2014 2:28:00 AM
Thanks, I'm happy this one attracted your attention- Prasenjit

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