The Mirror

My bedroom mirror suddenly broke open tonight
I stared at it aghast; it spilled all my past
Images rolled on- how I fought with my young sister
In our childhood; how I hated her for being my parents’ darling
A dilapidated doll, its head severed
The incessant teardrops of her- how I felt an inner elation

Images again; I grabbed the innocent lover-boy by his neck
Fists and punches – his blood-stained stare
I liked it, because he dared to love my teenaged sister
I was in my teens too, and secretly made passes at some of her friends
But my sister having a boyfriend- that was different

A slashed wrist, a gaping face; two writhing bodies of my parents
A prosaic funeral, a teenage girl laid inside the ground
Has she ever found peace? I am not sure
Being her brother I must have done the right thing

31.08.2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 7:16 AM
your images make me reel.. sweet congrats!
Banerjee Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:54 AM
Thanks.
Gibson Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Wow! This one is a heart cut wide open. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Banerjee Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 8:17 AM
Thank you a lot for the encouraging comment
Costello Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win. This is a powerful piece. :-)Christine
Banerjee Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 8:17 AM
Thanks.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Amazing write Prasenjit! Sad n heartfelt ,, very well penned! Congrats on ur win!
Banerjee Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Dr. Sharma.
Yvonne Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Banerjee Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Thanks, Dear friend, it's an inspiration to go on writing
Puddifoot Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:15 PM
this one really grabbed me, that first line pulled me straight into the poem; emotionally honest and disturbing, a truly confessional piece - congrats on your win in my contest
Banerjee Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Thanks, I'm happy this one attracted your attention- Prasenjit
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