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The Mirror

My pain does not show I bury it far too deep the pain in my soul I hide away from myself then the mirror shows my eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2012 4:53:00 PM
This is good. I like it. The mirror will show the truth about ourselves. Thanks for commenting on - The Letter. Lucilla
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Date: 4/5/2012 1:42:00 PM
yes, the mirror reflects the truth, whether we want to see it or not. nicely said!
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Date: 4/5/2012 8:48:00 AM
'this one is HOTTT FIRE. SOme of the best poems come from the most painful spots. Keep up the good work...but, for the love of god, don't get hurt! Love yir work. Stay outta this heat too. Already 90's ///No Fair, no spring:(
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Date: 4/5/2012 12:16:00 AM
One of the better tanka poems I've read on this site.
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Date: 4/4/2012 10:48:00 PM
yes, the eyes are the windows to the soul. Love it!
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Date: 4/4/2012 10:36:00 PM
Hi Rhonda nice perception... thanks for sharing,Cheryl....
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