The Mind Lock

I’m locked inside a place so very small
I do not fit inside it physically.
And yet it somehow is consuming me.
At times, I feel I can’t break loose at all!

My arms and legs were not bound up by rope.
I’m not behind some door with heavy chain.
In fact, I am not forced here to remain.
So why do I stay trapped like some big dope?

And can you guess what has a hold of me
and steals my precious evenings hour by hour?
Whatever could it be that wields such power
to rob me of the time with my TV!!!!

A little progress I’ve begun to make
as less and less I’m trapped here recently!
I’m taking baby steps. It’s up to me
to free myself. Poor habits I must break!

I must stop being such a nincompoop!
set limits on myself; take better care
of me; get sleep, and not just sit and stare
at  this small box that drowns me in the Soup!

(note: this is not a slam against Soup, but rather
just my frustration at myself for devoting so much of
my time to it; I honestly love every minute I am here!)


For Dane Ann's Contest: 
"Being Trapped and Breaking Loose"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/5/2013 12:01:00 AM
wish i had the control.. of not feeling trap.. enjoyed..pd
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:07:00 PM
Best of luck for this contest!!!!!!!! Your work seems very beautiful!!! I apologize for that bound of words!!!!!!! I know words in English language are hard to pronounce..............By the way i am happy that one who is master of language shares here his best works!!!!!!!!!!! i am very small girl in age and also experince....... Sorry once again!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/19/2010 3:54:00 AM
This is funny, Andrea. "Robs me of time with my TV!" LOL The good thing is that the soup nourishes the mind...great excuse! Right? LOL I enjoyed this. Have a great day. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/17/2010 3:19:00 AM
Loved this!!!! always Michael
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Date: 7/16/2010 9:26:00 AM
There are many of us who are "confined" to spending many hours on the Soup, Andrea. A great enclosed rhyme to which a lot of Soupers can relate! Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:41:00 AM
Hey Andrea, I can so relate to this piece of you, and the other one bout that "pre" thing hehe, luv WNN
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:32:00 AM
I like this because of it's inherent honesty, so the top mark for you, my dear. First it was the t.v. I remember it being called the vast wasteland, the light that failed, the old one eyed monster ( Can you believe that?) Now it is the Internet. It is one of the curses of Adam, I suppose and of Eve. You always write nothing less than competent, my dear. The Aurora models were the plastic Universal monster kits from the 1960's. If you go back, you should know a lot of them now. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:20:00 AM
see? I was supposed to really really log out when I saw your comments & here I am!! haha where do we meet up?? just say when & where & I'll go put on my wings or something haha-- & umm nope, sorry I am not sharing the twinkies!! They are RARE over here-- we only get them when somebody from the States comes home & brings us some & there's only less than 10 left, lol! & yupp haha I actually eat Spam :p the turkey one's not that bad either ;) ok really going now ttyl :) hugs!!
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:20:00 AM
Very good write~ Molly
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:02:00 AM
oops too long again it says-- here's the continuation...I think a lot of people can relate to this as well :) ok really got to go now-- that tiramisu of mine is soo waiting to be made already! hugs-- nikko :)
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:01:00 AM
oh I live this way too Andrea! Haha I can definitely relate--going to my faves-- this enclosed rhyme of yours has got to pay off, after spending so much time on it too--Enjoyed reading this haha like you were speaking my mind or something--mind if we take those baby steps together?? I said I'd be here, actually just drop by but here I am an hour later-- golly gee!! I hope this places high!!
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