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The Mind in Motion

The mind is an echo Reflecting someone's belief Like the notion of death That leads us to grief Merely bundles of thought Tied up in the past Forming identity layers We compare and contrast Programmed for survival Hardwired with fear Emotional alarm systems For when I am not here The mind is deceiving With a compass I roam One dwells in yourself To find the way home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 5/8/2019 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations on this moving winning poem P.M. : )
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Date: 5/8/2019 3:57:00 PM
Very thoughtful journey, P.M., congratulations!
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Date: 10/15/2018 10:32:00 AM
"Fav'd" this one too, very profound and honest.
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Date: 10/15/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thanks M.L. - you are very kind.
Date: 7/31/2018 10:47:00 PM
This writing truly deserves all the praises..
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Date: 7/1/2018 10:45:00 PM
Outstanding poesy, P.M., profoundly penned. Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 6/9/2018 10:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win, PM. Well done.
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Date: 6/9/2018 5:36:00 PM
So true, PM, and so well-stated - love this! Congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! Blessings! :-)
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Date: 6/8/2018 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations for your win P.M. :)
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Date: 5/20/2018 7:31:00 PM
Extremely insightful and if you know this can reprogramme those beliefs to create your own reality. V
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Date: 5/20/2018 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/20/2018 6:19:00 AM
Lovely, P.M. Congrats on your well deserved podium win.
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:22:00 AM
Lovely ode to the one who fires your soul. Don't give up the search.
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