The Mill Wheel

The Mill wheel wouldn't turn until the Spring
The joyful reapers had long since departed.
What bleakness these dark wintry months would bring;
Her death had left him numb and heavy-hearted. 

No longer would he hear her sweet refrain 
Or share the joy of harvest’s bounteous yield,
Her hand in his he’d never hold again
Nor feel her warmth as when their love was sealed.

'Whispers ran through the town from door to door'
‘She’s gone! The poor old miller’s wife has died’
No eye was dry, it cut folk to the core
To see him sit alone at eventide.

But changing seasons soften aching pain,
The rippling stream flows on, a new path seeks.
The cogs of life start turning once again,
Ice melts, revealing secrets- wheel creaks.

And every slow rotation calls to mind
The treasured memories which love entwined.


For the contest : Mill Wheel 
Sponsored by: Viv Wigley 

20/07/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Seeker Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 7:08 AM
What a superb poem, Wendy! Congrats on your win
Alex Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:45 AM
So sad, but beautifully written, Wendy. I really enjoyed this poem, Wendy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Watson Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:01 PM
A belated thank you for your kind comment, Sandra.
George   Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:52 AM
I really enjoyed this Wendy. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Watson Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:02 PM
Thank you, Elaine. it was an interesting prompt to set my imagination going.
Gentry Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. A love story! Creative, different. Well done. Enjoyed!
Watson Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Susan.
Gondolf Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 4:08 AM
Wendy, back to say congrats on your well deserved win. John
Watson Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:04 PM
John, many thanks for your time and interest.
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 1:27 AM
Congrats, Wendy, a lovely write, much enjoyed. Viv x
Watson Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:49 AM
I'm honoured to get a mention amongst such excellent contributions, Viv. Thank you. I really felt the ' murky mystery vibe' in the challenge but the romantic touch drew me in! I'm intrigued to know your inspiration for such compelling lines!
Smith Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Much enjoyed Wendy, good luck in the contest :)
Watson Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Thank you so much, Gary.
Gondolf Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Wendy, I enjoyed this is a well constructed story. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. John
Watson Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:05 PM
thank you John. Ah the wonders of the imagination!
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