The Mighty One

The Mighty One
(A Description of “Scene du deluge”)

He straddles jutting rocks beneath a pall
of sky. Beneath is swirling water, and
the crooked arm of one lone tree is all
he’s found to cling to with his left curled hand.

An older man, who also grasps the tree,
upon the young man’s sturdy back is borne.
His legs are dangling. Awful weight is he
for him who stands exposed, his clothing torn.

His wife hangs from his other hand. One breast
is clutched by her small babe, and from her strains
another child to keep from dark waves’ crest.
The burden of them all - one man sustains!

Can he, mere mortal, thwart their cruel demise?
Stark terror holds the answer in his eyes.

**Many years ago I visited the Louvre, and there I beheld a picture by Girodet of the romantic 
era . This painting stood out for me because of its depiction of a family in such huge peril 
that they were totally dependant on one man and  only his strength could save them all. If 
you copy and paste this link, I hope you might see this stunning picture. The picture's name 
translates to "Scene of a Flood" 

http://www.postershop.com/Girodet-De-Roussy-Trioson-Anne-Louis/Girodet-De-Roussy-
Trioson-Anne-Louis-Scene-De-Deluge-1165956.html
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gildersleeve Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win. An exceptional write. Warm Smiles, Connie
Gasun Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 9:51 AM
My biggest congratulations on your win in this contest and the many other consecutive wins in the previous contests my dearest friend Andrea. You always give outstanding writes. I'm sorry if my congratulations came so late because I was super duper busy this past few days. Always cheers! love and misses you, Leonora
A   Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 8:43 PM
Andrea, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Heather's "Famous Art" poetry contest. *Goodnight~LINDA
Mandani Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 8:01 PM
It reminds me of a fable. If he has to let go of all but one, who would he hold on to?
May Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 3:01 PM
congrats on your win Andrea...love your title....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 2:21 PM
And once again my friend here we are with congrats, love it xx
Ober Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Andrea, I was SO happy (but NOT surprised) to see your name at the top of my winners list! As usual, you totally kicked butt with your flawless metre and rhyme - you are a master of sonnets, my friend! Your descriptions are chillingly perfect for the painting you chose to describe. Congratulations on your win in my contest! :)
Flach Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Terrific Ekphrasis, Andrea. You are sooo skilled. I am in awe of your talent. This WILL do well in the contest, I have no doubt. Joe
Chachere Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 8:32 PM
thats quite an interesting picture. art is a crazy thing, just like writing really. you did well with 'picture this'(: and i think i will post sometime tonight, or within the late night. i have another narrative, and it will probably be parted into 2 poems.but buffy posted a poem.and then, thats good for your husband to finally do that(: -always
Green Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Great job! Seems we have the same taste in artists. I also chose Girodet. GL in the contest.
Moribund Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Hello Andrea: Great poem. It really captures (in words) the emotion and power of this work of art. When I was stationed in Germany, I spent a weekend in France and went to the Louvre. Thank you 4 reading my poem and commenting on it. Peace: Sheol
Mehta Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Yes, I pasted the link you provided and enjoyed the picture
Mehta Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Wonderful entry in the contest. I visited Louvre in 1989. Good luck in the contest, Andrea. This goes to my favorite.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 6:16 AM
See what happens today Andrea and we can play around with this later during the weekend.. OK..luv
Jordan Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:43 AM
Andrea, great description within this poetry I will have to give it a gander, thanks for the hook-up, God Bless, mj
A  Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:35 AM
I am like AMY I have 2 go look at the Painting .The best of luck to you in the CONTEST. Thanxs 4 the comment on my Eve,,IRMA
Green Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 1:24 AM
I think it's great. I have to go and take a look at the painting.
Strand Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 12:14 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 11:12 PM
This is confusing to me and not worth it to go nuts trying to figure it out .. I am sure it has some meaning to TPS Staff but the ratings are computed on a technical scale... anyway... one which we have no control... going to bed now ..want to try it again tomorrow? let me know on my blog..luv..nite.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:59 PM
OK now I am going to rate it a 7 ..and good luck in the contest ... luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:58 PM
This is beautiful Andrea .. but u have to make the form the Ekphrasis and not Sonnet as u have or Brian willl disqualify it... now I am commenting this without the rating...first.. luv..
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