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The Midnight Window

A window to another world, perhaps to other times
A window that is open when the midnight hour chimes
Few see the midnight window sitting there in yonder wall
’tis said before and after twelve it isn’t there at all

Be it frost or balmy night, be it pitch or full moon bright
There is no bulb or candlelight to aid the passerby at night
A blackened void, a gaping gap, within its frame no curtains flap
Tethered by some unseen strap, no man shall pass this cursed trap

Yellowed paint on rotted wood, a portal to the never good
A zone alone where evil stood, where men of virtue never would
An eerie tick, a walking stick, an eerie tock, a knock, knock, knock
Twelve: each chime a haunting shock from some unseen grandfather clock

At Twelve the passerby shall peek and hear the leaden darkness speak
Climb in my friend and take a seat and watch the empty rocker creak
And woe betide he who accedes, who all at once the window feeds
The Dark Imp’s stick does Dark Imp deeds and cracks your head until it bleeds

Come hither calls the final chime, take a peek, there’s little time
The peeking man who meant no crime… I know, for that last peek was mine
I dared to look and I was took, and drawn in by an unseen hook
And made to grasp the shepherd’s crook to grab the next who takes a look

Be sure to pass a minute past, perhaps you shall not breath your last
For then no frame, no shattered glass, no window there… so walk on… fast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 11/18/2021 3:59:00 PM
wow, you wrote very well of this ghostly place. Is there such a place you have known of? One of the better ghostly writes I have read here.
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/18/2021 4:10:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Straight out my mind. Not really sure what put the notion in my head, but it started as a window you shouldn’t look into (rather like the switch you shouldn’t switch) and it just grew from there. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 11/18/2021 3:12:00 PM
Excellent ink Terry would make a great Halloween story but having read your comment to Rico I cant stop smiling at the pic :-) hugs Jan xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/18/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thought you might be amused, Jan. Terry
Date: 11/18/2021 10:22:00 AM
Well done! Enjoyed, but the photo appears to be one of a giant turd overhanging the WC window as if someone didn't make it in time . . . .
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 3:10:00 PM
lol I will be back with poop soon lol xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/18/2021 10:40:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Rico. I see your point about the photo, but… with Jan still so unwell, I felt there wasn’t enough poop on soup so I thought I’d fill the void (ouch)….. THATS MY EXCUSE AND IM STICKING TO IT… the story… not the poop. Terry
Date: 11/17/2021 7:58:00 PM
Terry, I hereby dub you a certified Halloween Meshuginer! Only about 348 days until next Halloween, give or take a ghost or two. :) gw
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/18/2021 2:51:00 AM
Hmmm… I just looked up ‘Meshuginer’. ‘A mad and foolish person’ indeed… you know me too well ;-) Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/18/2021 1:10:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon. Erm… with Halloween ‘unseasonal’ now, aren’t ghosts two for one anyway? ;-) Terry
Date: 11/17/2021 6:43:00 PM
WOW! This is fantastic! Wonderful imagery that drew me in - I didn't want to stop reading! Blessings, Kim M
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/18/2021 1:14:00 AM
Thankyou Kim, I enjoy writing witty ditties and limericks, but now and then I like to write something with a little more meat on its bones. I would perhaps have made it longer but with most of the individual couplets having four rhymes it was gonna get burdensome. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
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