The Midnight

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     Dark and preserved
          the midnight
   with all of its radiance
             the Stars
   and the fullness of the
              rotund
            the Moon 

Oh how our arms wrapped 
       with unyielding
 while our lips betrothed
       in anticipation 
                of
          that bright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 6:44 PM
Imagine lips being betrothed. Lovely thought and I don't mind if I do. :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 1:55 PM
passion with a capital P... lovely,james! :) huggs, nette
Song Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 7:15 AM
James, this is the nicest romance under the midnight sky-I think I feel a shower of stars in the distance too! This is sooooo nice! Best to you! Gwendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 5:32 AM
soup mail James.. complete .. let me know luv..
Long Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 7:58 PM
very nice good job with the flow. cory
Foulk Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:50 AM
a very romantic and tender piece of fine poetry.
Neels Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 1:41 AM
Mr. Romance is in the Soup Building ;) love it James, hope yourself and Noah are doing okay.. love Wilma
Austin Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Yes, the Moon hath charm to create many moods and situations. Just the thought of a full moon doth make of a man quite horny sometimes. Have been away for a few days - damn computer broke down and had to buy a new one. LOve, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:43 AM
soup mail James.. ready set go..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 12:21 AM
Bright romance!! Good one, James.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 9:04 PM
soup mail James.. packing to fly back home tomorrow evening.. will work on project... airborne luv..
Devonshire Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Thank you for you kind comments, James. Wish we could talk. Need some prayers tomorrow. Hope you and Noah are doing well. Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 3:13 PM
Ahh....the romance just ooozes from this beauty, James!! Wonderful !!
Kendrick Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Great romantic and passionate work..Enjoyed..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 5:53 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your outstanding poetry this morning James. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Well I am in awe and anticipation James.. such beauty in these expressive lines..I can hardly wait for our.......soup mail luv...
Devonshire Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 1:30 PM
There is something about the full moon that brings out the romantic nature in many of us, James. (For others it brings out their animal nature -- Hooowl) Beautiful images of the night sky and that magic moment, dear James. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 12:49 PM
lips betrothed... nice image with passionate feelings, James
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