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1396 Poetry Contest
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Honorable Mention!

The Mexican Dahlia

The Mexican Dahlia tinged in burnt orangey-red makes me sigh 
                    as I slumber in a midsummer terra-cotta July sky~ poet
                              

    
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                                                   <  vv  vvv  vv >
                                           <<  vv   vvv vv vv  vv  >>
                                         <<   v v vvv  vvv  vvv v v >>
                                  <<< vv vv vvv  darling  vvv vv vv >>>
                              < << vv vv<<< a  h  l  i  >>>vv vv >> >                                         
                                   <<<< vvv d( (( ( O )) )a vvv >>>>
                                <<<<    auspicious Mexican om~  >>>>
                                <  < < bright  b vv v v vv l bloom > >
                                    <  < < vv    e a u t i f u    vv > > >
                                      <  <<  v  vv vv vv  vv vv v >> >
                                               <<   v  vvv vv  v  >>
                                                    < vv  vvv vv >
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Baker Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Very creative shape for your Haiku, Anaya. I love it! I've seen a lot of these beautiful blooms, my friend. Congrats on your placement in the contest! Bill
Anaya Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 6:48 PM
You are a lucky man, Bill. Those are most beautiful. It's very nice to see you posting , hoping you're enjoying. TyVm for the congrats ~
Goldsmith Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your win... WOW!!! What a creative write/shape. Love it and the pretty picture... Have a fun day/week writing way...............
Anaya Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Always a pleasure reading your kind reviews Have a nice day poetess!
Kauffman Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 11:34 AM
Oh, how fun, and creative, is this, Anaya! Congratulations on your win! I was not aware of the Mexican dahlia. It is as beautiful as summer sunshine! You have done it justice! Blessings to you.
Anaya Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Sam, congratulations on being chosen for your poem "Augury" which will be published in the Winter 2025 edition of The Orchards. What an honor in deed! WOW
Anaya Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 10:53 PM
Ty sweet Sam! I really enjoyed reading your review. xhugs Anaya
Gorelick Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Reads like love in bloom, Anaya. "The Blue Dahlia" is a 1946 American film noir I here it's intriguing. Well-arranged display! My best, Robert
Anaya Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Really? It sounds interesting. Ty Robert! It's always a pleasure to see you~
Loving Iii Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:10 PM
Hard to see. But I get the ideal.
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:46 PM
You'll get used to it eventually It's rather simple actually; darling dahlia, auspicious Mexican om, bright beautiful bloom~
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Hey you’re a dab hand at these shape haiku’s Anaya, they are really different to get right, but well worth the effort when they come together, just like here in this beautiful verse, cheers David
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Thanks David. It's fun to figure the shape out. If it's remotely close I'm happy. We'll I can be quite meticulous as well, lol funny thing the symbols can mess with PS's coding, < b> >>> was an issue, i directed it to move right. Ah, tyvm!
Hind Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 7:41 PM
An interesting piece, liked the image- :)
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Ty, Paige, it's fun to do!
Winter Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Absolutely beautifully written piece, Dear Anaya! Love, Anne
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 12:53 PM
Tyvm Anne! xhugs
Rolland Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 10:39 PM
so creative, enjoyed, will read again, have a nice day
Anaya Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Nice to see you Yann. Hope you are well!
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