The Message

It was a message 

touchingly saying 

the life is but a passage,

.but where are you ??continued search for any clue, 

a crying soul begging to know and heart to rule

on the edge of 
that mountain where he sat..watching the sun ,

watching the rise till the set ,,recalling past ,

living the now ,loving then ,trying to keep little of it..,

the same she does..with no regret ......

on that mountain where is the days are very few ,

trying to grasp little of life and love true while 

the days continue flit

.but who is she ?!she is apiece of the large universe having 

so much of his grit.

trying to be in his place, watching with him how the sun plays ,

and it's beauty stealing the days.., 

To her he said ..bask with me in the life ,in the sun ,

as not every day we will stay and being touched by sunny ray,

In that place seeing him watching the sky and it's blue..

If this is the case and what is said is very true then hand in hand ,

and face to face ..the fate they draw , 

If this is the case then every day the love grow .as what you plant you always 
get .....so why to rue?....

It was her tool ,it was a feeling
a touching call from your soul... bask with me ,let us glow ..and there
I sat ..watching the sun
and more of you ..becoming more and very sure that the seed is very
true ..and the worries were never due ,

                      it was a message 

     it was a feeling ..continued singing only you ......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 8:25 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 10:57 PM
HANA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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