The Merry-Go-Round

                                                     
                                                    
                                             Round and round on the merry-go-round,
                                                  Round and round I go.
                                                        See me on my stallion high,
                                                                 See now, I dip down low.

	    The music plays, it never stops,
	 It goes on all day and night.
       At times, there’s sadness in its tune;
     At times, it sounds so bright.

                                            Round and round and round and round	
                                                 With all those ups and downs.
                                                     The stallions marching in a line
                                                         With silly painted frowns.

     I see the others riding too—
	Content enough they seem.
	    Perhaps beneath the frozen smiles
	         Each like me could scream…
						
						                         
                                                      “Let me off! Please let me off!
						          I’m getting nowhere fast;
				                             There's so much I must see and do
					                           Before my time has passed!”


                                               But round and round and round it goes,
                                            And round and round again.
                                         Might as well enjoy the ride,
                                     For when it stops, what then?



                                                    Sandra M. Haight
            
                                                       ~2nd Place~
                                               Contest: Creative Layouts
                                                 Sponsor: Broken Wings
                                                    Judged: 10/25/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/27/2015 9:41:00 PM
Sandra,, Wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:27:00 AM
This is so so so lovely, dear Sandra!! I loved your metaphor!! Congrats on your wonderful win!! :D :D
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Sneha. I am grateful for your visit, positive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/26/2015 9:17:00 AM
Sandra, are you dizxy on the merry go round or with the many wins? Love, Balveen
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2015 9:19:00 AM
Ha Ha, yes, dizzy on the merry-go-round of life, for sure! Thank you for your supportive visits and nice comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/26/2015 8:44:00 AM
I really enjoyed your take on the contest Sandra. Your message is clear and laid out with pleasing position. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 10/26/2015 1:10:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Sandra with this wonderful creative layout and poetry!
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Date: 10/25/2015 5:53:00 PM
oh my another metaphor on life. But I am loving it. You did a great job, Sandra. BIG congrats for your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/25/2015 5:10:00 PM
Ah, deep write, Sandra. Beautiful layout.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2015 9:13:00 AM
Glad you like it, James. Thank you for visiting my poem with your kind comment. Sandra
Date: 10/25/2015 1:31:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. I really appreciate your lovely visits and positive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/25/2015 12:40:00 PM
A question mark it is, Sandra...after that experience you'll be tempted at having another go!:) Congratulations on a lovely podium finish! // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2015 9:00:00 AM
Hi Paul, yes, as long as we can stay on our 'merry-go-round' we're good to go! Thanks again for your continued visits and support! Sandra
Date: 10/25/2015 12:17:00 PM
Such a unique write Sandra I have loved reading these creative poems - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/27/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Yes, I enjoyed all the visual creativity and verbal imagery of all the poems also. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/13/2015 2:00:00 PM
uniquely composed in a shape that delights... i like the whole feel of this write, sandra.. huggs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/14/2015 10:37:00 AM
Hi Nette, thanks for your supportive comment. Your comments are always so much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/13/2015 12:35:00 PM
Very clever, awesome rhythm, and rhyme, and great shape. A very entertaining poem, I used to love the merry go rounds as a kid. : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2015 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Mark. Tried to get a circular shape, but it's difficult to work on the small area provided for posting poems, especially with all those ads overlapping! I appreciate your positive comment! Sandra
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