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The Mermaid Calls

The Mermaid Calls

You draw me close, 
and I can not swim. 
You lure me, 
tempt me, 
and tell me…
things.

Your beauty is beyond, 
all that I have ever known, 
or will know. 
How can I look away?

I want to touch what I see, 
I want to be part of 
what I do not know.
You are illusive. 
You are austere…

The woman, 
bodiless and boundless.  
Her hair soft kelp, 
Her touch…

The hope to drown, 
a witless man, 
and support 
a mariner.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 23, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Very nice Ann. Really grasping the horror of a true mermaid. Much like the Sirens, merwomen have always been about control and death in the end; not a Walt Disney happy version. Thanks.
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November 23, 2019 at 6:47 PM
The ocean is lovely, and powerful... ty for you kind words. Have the very nicest night. Ann
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