The Melting of Ice (Part 2)

I shoo away 
  all my twisted creations
 (I can’t let them taint this
      With the vileness
           I spawned them from)

She approaches
   I lower my head,
     eyes staring into hers,
opening myself,
      feeling her
intertwine her energy
      with mine,
closer she comes.

At this point 
  mist like trails of essence
spiral out of the corners of our mouths
   like smoke,
       hazing sight.
I can feel her heart leaping
   as I touch the right side of her neck,
      the throbbing
stirring my desires
and as our power 
  closes us off to the world,
    time freezes,
   ice crystals
forming on my fur,
       her feathers,
snapping off under their own weight
making chime like sounds 
   as they shatter 
beneath us,
my nerves alight
   as her fingertips
graze my cheek,
   and her claws sink into
the small of my back,
like a forest fire
running through the brush,
  melting away the obtrusive growth.

I feel her quiver
    as my nails run down
her ribs
   and her slim,
narrow waist,
our  lips touch
   and the clock starts again,
      (reality must exert itself)
 as the mist swirls in
    I know what to expect,
so it doesn’t burrow into my brain
when in the clarity
         she’s gone,
instead,
  my heart still pumps,
     and in the worst case
      this undead
has felt life again,
   maybe I’ll progress
instead of shriveling 
       and sealing my crypt once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/26/2009 10:50:00 AM
excellennnnnttttt--a pleasure to read=-charma
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:17:00 PM
Let it burrow into your brain, because in the clarity she might never let you go.
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