The Meeting

The glamour of her skin faded
 like late-afternoon sunbeams 
that settled  on rose petals 'dust

But , not the light in her wide chatoyant eyes
That light was still  glowing bright
Like a  freshly washed white frock of an ingenue child
A child who knew, each flutter of a butterfly churning deep inside
was to be preserved  for this ineffable  day. 
Today , the day She was to greet 'the one '
Down the valley , by the orchid tree
where minutes ticked seconds and time.

For so long , She waited for this moment
to  turn and find him there , to look him in those eyes
 Eyes circled with wrinkles of loss and laughter
of many deaths and life.


His demure maiden . The cynosure  who filled his thoughts
without even knowing  how or why ,  For weeks, months, and  years
Was She there by his side ,or was this another betraying vision 
of the lissome lady's smile ?

It was her voice . It was the mellifluous  sound of her song
lulling him into  sleep.This was not Endymion's dream
Nor an unheard wish  on spumes of falling stars.
This was the warmth of his breath upon her neck's nape
It was their once so vacant hearts , beating one to one.

It was their holding of hands, their first promised dance.
A panacea to a long term desease of loss , and loss again.

A new chapter  -to be continued. 
A sempiternal journey  of what little time remains. 
Trembling hands ,Scribbling verses on hopskotch 
Alll ending with  the same repeated names
 and unforgettable joyous refrains. 



Thanks for the ten words challenge S.One
1) Glamour , 2) Chatoyant,  3) Igenue , 4) ineffable , 5) demure
6) Sempiternal , 7) panacea, 8) mellifluous,  9 )lissome , 10) cynosure


Who wants to know the meaning of all these ten words
pls read S. One 's ten word challenge poem.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/17/2016 11:46:00 AM
Beautiful, sweet one. Your writes always have that dreamy touch of romance. :) I couldn't never pull this one off. Great job. Hugs
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:58:00 PM
This was so bubbly and playful ... it gave me that feeling of first love, where everything is new and exciting. You really penned something lovely here, with seemingly little effort, as the words flowed like honey. Great poem, especially considering the very odd words you had to use ... well done, Charmaine!
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:30:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, You did an excellent job using the 10 words. I saw a beautiful scene before me. You made this difficult challenge look easy. A undeniable 7- Alexis
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:06:00 AM
Charma, Well executed the words. A nice poem.........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/15/2016 3:56:00 AM
Wondrous writing masterfully composed dear, Charmaine! A seven!
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:04:00 PM
you did S.O VERY proud with this gorgeous writing, charma. Always a delight to visit your poetry and thanks so much for reading mine.
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Date: 5/14/2016 5:13:00 PM
"Trembling hands, Scribbling verses on hopscotch" I LOVE that line. This was a very engaging read. I've actually read it several times and just haven't gotten around to commenting. This is really rich with interesting phrases, and I love those kinds of writes.
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Date: 5/14/2016 8:36:00 AM
You are not one to shy away from a challenge, Charm, and you have tackled this one with delightful inspiration. The suggested words fitted in without any effort... more points in your favour! #7+ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/12/2016 7:31:00 PM
Great reading Charmaine. The ten word challenge, huh? I might try that.
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Date: 5/12/2016 6:56:00 PM
Cool Char! The sound....of the special words lights your sweet poem!
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Date: 5/12/2016 6:32:00 PM
You really made me work having to look up all these words...The cat eyes brings intrigue...waiting all that time to finally be with "the one"...very lovely Charma..I love a fairytale ending : )
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