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The Meanness of Nature

Plush peacock king wears his crown with pride Heralded as one of the features of his spring time park Admired by thousands, refreshed daily and often He is created from the prettiest flowers. Majestic, regal, bold, he is but one of the masterpieces Created by gardeners who have conquered flower-ologies. Trussed up in the most vibrant posies at the end of each shift Strutting his stuff, gloating at his poor brown queen of one color She sits at the other edge of the garden, in her plainness. Visited by almost no one, as she is as dull as he is colorful. The meanness of nature; she understands how the mallard female feels As she watches the two-leggeds flock oohing and ahhing around the king.

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Date: 6/9/2020 1:56:00 AM
So many people fail to realize the reason the female is a dull color. She must be able to hide in the foliage when she is nesting to protect her and the little ones. The male is brightly colored to be able to attract attention and lead the danger away.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/9/2020 10:40:00 AM
I had no idea this was the reason; now it does not seem mean at all.
Date: 6/8/2020 6:12:00 PM
Hello Caren, all female birds are a dull color. Whereas the male has the beauty of the colors. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/9/2020 1:31:00 PM
Hello Caren, yes Judy's comment made sense. Have a nice day my fiend.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/9/2020 10:40:00 AM
It always seemed weird to me until I read what Judy wrote. Now it makes perfect sense.
Date: 6/8/2020 5:55:00 PM
Oh yes, well worded.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/9/2020 10:42:00 AM
Thank you. I shall take a tiny bow.
Date: 6/8/2020 4:29:00 PM
True...but he cannot hide anywhere. Excellent imagery!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/9/2020 10:42:00 AM
He surely cannot!

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