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The Me Within

Now when I Smile I feel it’s coming from the Heart Not like I Used to smile when I did it for Likes... Something has changed in me or maybe Rearranged to be What I am Now is no longer behind Closed Doors... I am Changing… I have to tell it like it is... No Disrespecting…. How you choose ~ Your Choice to live I know that I’m Changing Words flow out My mind I’m More understanding What’s Good I'll do this time Yes, I am Changing… Into the Someone I've always been... The Me within...

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Date: 6/30/2021 8:39:00 AM
What a creative write. Some change as they age for the better and some do not. I guess we all live with the me within. Just some do it better than others. You are a wonderful writer. Wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 8/23/2019 12:47:00 PM
Second comment This work of art on a rocket ship to my FAVS Panagiota
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Date: 8/23/2019 12:44:00 PM
Very impressed with you! Not only as a poet, but your genuineness. I know it's nothing near the changing we do in order To be better. That's baloney. You discoverd the you who you always have been is the you today. You met yourself, that's transformational.. That's how I see this. Panagiota
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Date: 8/25/2019 3:50:00 PM
You are right...you spend most of your life trying to recreate yourself only to end up where you started...with you...
Date: 7/21/2019 9:23:00 PM
A beautiful poem Arturo... I like the depth and sincerity in this... I can relate to it so well... Keep up the great writing!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/24/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Kelly...A lovely day to you and all around you....
Date: 7/19/2019 10:40:00 AM
now what you need is a preserving agent...a term for that is 'slow-down' : )
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Date: 7/18/2019 4:22:00 PM
Hi Arturo, inside, outside, growing, changing, older, wiser -- we all go through phases in life Arturo, go with the flow my friend for as long as it takes and enjoy the ride. Such a different write,loved it! Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/19/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thanks again Jennifer...
Date: 7/17/2019 6:06:00 AM
There is nothing more important to change into than your true self, my friend. It is never completely done, but the journey is wonderful! "when words flow out of my mind" - this happens and I think "where did THAT come from?" giving Trixie all the credit, when I know some of it has to be me.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/19/2019 8:46:00 AM
We can be so multi dimensional and yet be one...it's a balancing act...giving credit where credit is due...All the best Caren
Date: 7/16/2019 1:56:00 PM
Perfectly penned... A bit of ancient wisdom is perhaps in order: The Sages wrote that the mark of a true scholar-saint is that his insides are exactly like his outside. Seems relevant to your wonderful write, Arturo! Best wishes, gw
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/16/2019 5:03:00 PM
Gracias Gershon...I've been going through a phase...I hope it ends soon...I feel so distant...Thanks for your good wishes...this man need them all...
Date: 7/16/2019 9:04:00 AM
Great one Arturo! Positive growth and change :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/16/2019 1:02:00 PM
CHANGE Heidi...CHANGE...I'm beginning to... Thanks for the support I cherish it...
Date: 7/16/2019 6:24:00 AM
This is great Arturo. Funny how we change with age, I guess it's true...the older we get the wiser we get. Too many people have fake smiles but when it comes from the heart it really shows. Have a great day...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/16/2019 1:00:00 PM
Hello Charles, thanks for the Big Up... but you know, you got to put something on before you go out side, and for the fortunate a smile can get them by...not an easy ting to shake off
Date: 7/16/2019 1:09:00 AM
Growing older and wiser my friend! Great news dear, Arturo! Very well written!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/16/2019 12:53:00 PM
Well...pain is a good teacher and time can do wonders...

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