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The Maze of Life

The maze of life Rocked by the waves of emotions and reality, I follow the rhythm far from conformity. The cry of my soul overwhelmed by sorrow, Praying for the hope of a better tomorrow. The journey of life and its sharp end corners, So often ignored are the foresight warners. Who, with the wisdom gracefully acquired, Guide the ones that the One inspired. Some paths are wide…. some are narrow, In some… are set up traps in a row. Resembling a maze fit with diversity, Crossing paths with beings indulged in adversity. The meaning of love is a foreign dream, The test of kindness has drowned in a stream. As for the humble notion of genuine care? Its essence foolishly outstripped … bare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/8/2010 8:41:00 AM
Very good poem on the emotions of everyday life. Keep it up!!!!..
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:14:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:48:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:45:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 8:04:00 AM
congratulations, your poem is quite beautiful
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:01:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:42:00 PM
I wish I could tell how your words have impacted me. There are still many streams with no dead thing in them, so please do believe that somebody cares. Good poem, God bless you
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Date: 3/22/2009 2:14:00 PM
Awesome write here Nassira ... and there are many who care here at PoetrySoup. I just hope we can hang on to the site. Glad to see you back with your inspring writing!!
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