The Maypole of Life

The dancers weave, their threads are wound;
some gold, some red, some darkest brown.
Their cords (our lives) spun to the sound
of Mother Earth changing her gown.

Some gold, some red, some darkest brown;
the ribbons pull us round and round
as Mother Earth changes her gown.
Fine patterns form, colors compound.

The ribbons pull us round and round
while time keeps counting swiftly down.
Fine patterns form, colors compound;
life's tapestry can then be found.

While time keeps counting swiftly down,
the dancers weave, their threads are wound.
Some gold, some red, some darkest brown,
in Mother Earth's most changing gown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 29, 2015 at 5:34 PM
DARKLAND, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
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February 16, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Wow'd again !! Such a difficult form to write and have it read so effortlessly. That's talent !! ... have to read more.
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February 13, 2015 at 6:30 PM
A lovely pantoum, Rachel...this is such a difficult form and yours flows effortlessly! I enjoyed reading...best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda
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February 8, 2015 at 8:22 PM
I love this..this is one of my favoarite forms and it worked beautifully with this theme. BG
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