The Marlboro Man and Me

Twenty years have passed since that last cigarette. 
Tonight, out of the clear blue, I craved a king-size ***-- 
The one thing out of everything I know I’d soon regret. 

Suddenly, my forehead broke out in tiny beads of sweat. 
I sat quietly, staring, thinking about the suffocating drag; 
Twenty years have passed since that last cigarette. 

Years swiftly pass and the mind still cannot forget, 
It should be the first to send up the signal, the red flag, 
The one thing out of everything I know I’d soon regret. 

I was a teenager when the Marlboro man and I first met 
In a hole-in-the-wall café where we teens danced the rag, 
Twenty years have passed since that last cigarette.  

At fifty I gave up smoking when my heart became upset 
Over twenty-five years I have not had one, I must not brag, 
The one thing out of everything I know I’d soon regret. 

I know I would pass up that cigarette, even if I lost a bet, 
Nothing would be worth it; the thought of it makes me gag, 
Twenty years have passed since that last cigarette, 
The one thing out of everything I know I’d soon regret.


Written April 8, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rigoler Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Never was tempted to smoke, Milton. Talk about money going up in smoke! I think the success of your villanelle (besides skill) are the easy rhymes. At the moment I'm retranslating a favorite R. M. Rilke poem "Autumn." Will attempt a villanelle once I get a suitable subject. / Maurice
Hankins Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 9:20 AM
I think you are right, Maurice. The double rhyme scheme is tricky. It helps to think of words that have many rhymes to start with. Oh, are you going to publish Rilke's poem? Hope so.
Flaherty Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 5:29 PM
Is not a Smoker who has quit no matter how long since the last cigarette Still just a Smoker who has quit in essence Why we choose to stop in the 1st place is bizarre.
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Maybe the better question is "Why do we choose to start in the 1st place???"
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:23 PM
My wife died of cancer at 70. She was a lifelong smoker, and the doctor said smoking was the cause. Open heart surgery did it for me...caused by smoking. That should be reason enough. But, until someone has experienced severe illness and pending death, they probably won't. Deb still had the habit when she died.
Flaherty Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Love this write of yours LMH Because it makes one think and ponder why
Leffanta Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 11:50 AM
As a 2-4 pack per day man for 35-years (my mother-in-law referred to me as, "The Chimney"), I am confident you understand I enjoyed smoking and would still be smoking today were it not for the fact that I resented paying $ for what used to cost 17-cents per pack! Aloha! Rico
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 12:24 PM
I hear you, Rico. Thanks for stopping by and sharing. And, no, I couldn't afford to smoke these days!
Y. Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Hi L. Milton, I can relate to your poem. My thing was drinking; when I drank, I smoked a lot. But when I wasn't drinking, I seldom smoked. When I said goodbye to boos, I bid farewell to the Marlboro man. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Thanks so much, Alexis. I am glad to hear you kicked both of them to the curb!
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