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The mark has been made

The mark has been made Now it is time for you to pay For all that you have done For all that has been There is no escape And you have no friends I will make you suffer I will make you hurt You took all we had And then some more You broke this world Now leave you fiend Forever you are banished To burn in the smouldering ashes of what you did For god takes to pity on beasts And you are no exception. After what happened... there will be no retribution. Cold and dead is what you are No peace will ever befriend you If it does it will be blackened by your evil For you cannot love with no heart Now, now the time has come For see there is no sun The sky has gone dark yet this is a happy day Because you will die Then all shall see That this new world will be The one without decay This one will never fade away. Where its children will not feed on its remains Or horrify it with death and destruction. This will be the perfect place The quiet place... Now with no further delay Let your body die then decay~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 5/7/2009 12:44:00 PM
Thank you i try to do my best
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:15:00 AM
It reminds of Dante ... but more lyrical ... the imagery and desire blends into perfection ... the last line is so literal and yet above all so powerfully delivered. Keep writing.
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