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The Maple Tree

Cruel life that goes in diurnal circles,
Never a rest from the inexorable
Events that are flung onto our souls,
No one is ready to defy the unacceptable. 

Still we bear the jabs, the tests, the surgery
Hoping to live a better and easy life,
Till better days arrive and we will sweat
As summer heats scorch and wish an end to strife.

A year I spent bedridden full of pain
And saw the sturdy maple tree change 
Spring brings out its leaves, summer its fruit,
As seeds disperse in quite a long range
New saplings grow but the tree begins its death
Leaves take new color, an exquisite exchange,
But in the end death is inevitable as it is to all.
So I stay in my bed till time takes its toll.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 4:43 AM
Being on bed for long is a disheartening experience. I had the same experience and I can very well relate to your feelings. In Nature too we see exuberant growth and final decay !
Skelly Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 8:30 AM
The life cycle of deciduous trees is a perfect metaphor for life, death, and rebirth.. I did enjoy this write Victor...Delice
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 9:16 PM
Such a sad verse, great imagery of nature. We suffer from ailment we do not desire , but we try to go on and hope.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Such a beautiful tree Victor, as your poem says death is inevitable, but life is wonderful and we must enjoy the time we have. An absorbing write… Belle
One Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 12:08 PM
This is so deep.. I love the opening stanza, because it is so true... A great write..
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 11:16 AM
- A beautiful tree ... everything has an end ... but the tree will bloom again in the spring ... no reason to stay in bed ... enjoy the autumn fireworks and clear air, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Your beautiful and poignant verse contemplating death's inevitability, is so well written. I hope that it doesn't reflect your personal experience, though, and that you're not bedridden. Have a blessed week, Evelyn
Ball Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Victor I truly hope you are not bedridden. When I was bedridden with my appendectomy and then again with a broken hip it was horrible. This is a beautiful but sad write speaking of accepting the inevitable but death is not the end for those who love The Lord. The body dies but YOU will live on. God Bless my friend. JB
Poet Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Superbly penned, Victor, you write with a lot of self-reflection, Victor. In many ways, the seasonal cycle can be compared to the course of human life. Excellent as always, my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 5:13 AM
I don't know if this is just a write or if a real life event for you. If a real life event, I hope you are much better soon. Maple trees give off such a beautiful show especially either the yellow maple or Japanese Maples. Either of them bring some color to the yard or forest. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Rose  Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 4:06 AM
One must never give up Victor even if it means walking to the window and thanking God for the colors of that beautiful maple , sending love and prayers that he keep you strong, day by day : )
Horsman Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Such is your poetic depth, my dear friend, you reminds us all we are a part of nature, when our winter arrives, i wonder if we shall reign once again in spring. Your poem is sad, yet i feel empathy with you, my pain also is sometimes my inspiration, as i am sure with your wonderful poetry is yours.
Cunningham Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 1:50 AM
The man who has perfect health is a very rich man indeed. Sadly for many of us we have the burden of ill health. Tom
Y. Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 1:02 AM
Hi Victor, You have penned such a well written, introspective write. Just like the maple tree, all will we meet the same fate. I hope you are doing better, my friend-Alexis
Seeker Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Superb write, Victor, as usual, hope you, as the fictional character in the poem, gets better soon
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 4:17 PM
You are in an introspective mood. Feel better, my friend!
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Intensely contemplative write, Victor. The cycle of seasons--quite a metaphor for life. Excellent as always.
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