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The Manipulator

riding artificial waves – he exploits her alternating moods For Monoku Contest sponsored by Silent One. Placed 2nd

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Date: 11/16/2020 2:45:00 PM
Perfectly penned in just a few words. You are a master at writing these, Paul :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/17/2020 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, Angela. I have taken a liking to short Japanese poetry forms; quite challenging. Regards // paul
Date: 4/30/2020 8:35:00 PM
The manipulator is an intriguing personality ... what causes one to constantly dream up ways of maneuvering people like pawns on a chess board. Some sort of strange thrill, or is it in their DNA? Your poem makes me ponder...
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Date: 5/1/2020 4:38:00 PM
I'm pleased I got your mind working, Timothy ... and thank you for stopping by once again! Regards // paul
Date: 3/27/2020 3:15:00 PM
This is so true, dear. What inspiration moved you to write it.
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:21:00 AM
I watch and try to understand people, my friend! ~ Thank you for stopping by. Hugs // paul
Date: 1/23/2020 2:49:00 PM
Nice one Paul. Well describes the manipulator. love phyl
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Date: 1/24/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you once again for your consecutive visits today, Phyllis...much appreciated! Hugs // paul
Date: 1/18/2020 8:33:00 AM
Wow. A puppeteer ...
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Date: 1/18/2020 4:49:00 PM
Than you for your reaction, Kai :) Regards // paul
Date: 1/3/2020 5:54:00 PM
Forgot to congratulate you on a great win, Paul. Waiting for a new one from you!!
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Date: 1/7/2020 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea :) Have a lovely day. Regards // paul
Date: 12/31/2019 10:58:00 AM
WoW! Paul, This was so well done. Congratulations on your fine win. Happy New Year to you and your family. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/1/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you on all counts, Alexis! May you and your loved ones have a new year filled with joy, good health and love:) // paul
Date: 12/30/2019 12:15:00 PM
Imaginative Monoku that requires seamanship to write dearest, Paul! Congratulations! It pays to live in a maritime country! Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you, Demi. Malta started off the new year with sunshine:) Wishing you all the best for 2020! // paul
Date: 12/28/2019 7:37:00 PM
Congratulations! This one was my favorite.
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:08:00 AM
You are too kind, MD...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 12/28/2019 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations. You are a master of the shorter version!
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:10:00 AM
Thank you for your generosity, Krish:) All the best. // paul
Date: 12/27/2019 5:24:00 PM
well done. (Sadly, there is many like he and she out there, LORD have mercy) shalom, shalom Happy 202 Friend
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:15:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Anil. May the New Year bring you good health, love and peace! // paul
Date: 12/27/2019 4:33:00 PM
Good one, Paul. Congrats on your placement. Regards
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:26:00 AM
Pleased you liked it, Charles; thank you & regards // paul
Date: 12/27/2019 2:18:00 PM
Paul, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:31:00 AM
Thank you my friend Eve. All the best to you:) Hugs // paul
Date: 12/27/2019 2:05:00 PM
Bravo to the guy who has mastered that fine art. Congrats on your podium finish, Paul.
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Date: 1/1/2020 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line...you are too kind. Best regards // paul
Date: 12/27/2019 1:28:00 PM
Really cool one, Paul. May you enjoy good health in the new year.
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Date: 1/1/2020 7:59:00 AM
Glad you like it, Andrea. Hope you are keeping well, now and all through the new year! Warm regards // paul
Date: 12/27/2019 12:51:00 PM
Wow. And riding alternating moods - he exploits her artificial moods. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Kai. Best wishes to you, too...happy new year! // paul
Date: 12/27/2019 10:10:00 AM
You are surfing an ocean of words.. knowing how to handle their depths and wealth.. reaching skilfully a wide range of meaning and in beauty you display your work to your avid readers "The Manipulator"! A captivating Monoku! Always a great pleasure to read your wonderful poetry, Paul.. My warmest wishes and regards. Blessings to you.
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:33:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, Besma. Your meaningful feedback is one I always look forward to. It is also my pleasure to read your poetry. Warm regards and blessings ~ paul
Date: 12/27/2019 9:58:00 AM
I really dislike manipulators.. great one liner.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, S-1. Hope the new year treats you kindly! // paul
Date: 12/26/2019 10:21:00 AM
Well said Paul--that's what they do. All the best.
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Date: 12/26/2019 11:48:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Vijay. Best regards // paul
Date: 12/26/2019 10:00:00 AM
wow so deep! Great one dear Paul, happy holidays! x:-)-luloo
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Date: 12/26/2019 11:47:00 AM
Thank you dear Laura:) I hope you have been enjoying the holidays, too! (Pls check out my blog under today's date) Warm regards // paul

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