Tahera Mannan Poet Free verse

The Man In the Moon

I sat alone
In my garden chair
Gazing up into the sky
The bright moon
Seem to beckon me
My heart skipped a beat
When my eyes spied
The man in the moon
He looked so divine
So warm and alive
He smiled softly
And I almost cried
My lonely heart
Lifted out of misery
My skin shivered
My face smiled
Oh yes he was
My man in the moon

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 4, 2010 at 5:00 AM Congratulations on your win Tahera in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick October 1, 2010 at 9:14 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest, Tahera! Enjoy!! Peace, love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire September 30, 2010 at 8:19 AM Tahera, Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2010 at 8:26 PM So glad this made the top ten. Nice to see you, Tahera. LUv ,Andrea

Joyce Johnson September 29, 2010 at 7:55 PM Nice take on the man in the moon. congratulations. Love, Joyce

John Freeman September 29, 2010 at 6:43 PM Nice free verse Tahera, Congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 29, 2010 at 6:00 PM Congrats Tahera on your win in the Harvest Moon contest with this rare beauty .. enjoy your sweet success and victory tonight my friend with luv..

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2010 at 7:53 PM This is a sweet romantic little fantasy poem, Tahera. Very nice. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick September 17, 2010 at 1:38 PM Enjoyed your write about the appreciate of nature and the good effect it can have on a person...Glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Debbie Guzzi September 17, 2010 at 10:13 AM Yes dear poet a much stronger write and entry, go on a bit more discribe the sounds the scents, how the moonlight fell & felt, were there other creatures in the moonlight, you have time HUGS!

Carolyn Devonshire September 17, 2010 at 7:48 AM Looking up at the night sky (or enjoying nature in general) always provides an uplifting feeling, Tahera. I like the approach you took for Deb' contest. I will be writing on the same phrase if the contest hasn't closed when I return from my trip to Disney World this weekend. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2010 at 6:35 AM Very imAGINATIVE AND CREATIVE about the man in the moon, Tahera

David Smalling September 17, 2010 at 6:13 AM I love your poetry, this theme has engaged me several times. Please stay inspired to write more. Your friend, always.