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Nov. 2, 2025         10.56 am

The Man in the Elevator - CM

The man in the elevator was free
So, he escorted a beautiful lady
They’d whole day window shopping
Just a mall to malls hopping
Her sweet company was his salary.

That man in the elevator was cool
Looking after the safety of people
Assisting them up and down
Seeing her again, he frowned
Exhausting at malls… I wanted my stool.

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Paula Goldsmith November 2, 2025 at 10:53 AM I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. Thanks for the laugh. When I was young, I worked an elevator asking people what floor did they want??? Great Picture from memories of old.  "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............