The Man in the Elevator

The man in the elevator pressed every floor, 
Then grinned at us all like he'd settled a score. 
"I'm practicing patience," he said with a wink, 
"And testing if anyone's close to the brink.”

We stopped at floor two
he hummed a tune, 
At three, he tap-danced, 
at four, howled at the moon. 
By seven, he'd fashioned a hat from his tie, 
At nine, he was teaching the buttons to fly.

When finally we reached the twenty-third floor, 
He bowed like a maestro and waltzed out the door, 
Leaving us stunned in that small metal room 
Wondering if we were the ones to assume.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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November 5, 2025 at 3:52 AM
Wow.. This may certainly win a place in the contest..— your words flow with such grace, Dr. I can’t help being greedy for more of your poetry.
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November 5, 2025 at 4:06 AM
Thanks for your wonderful wishes, Jenish.
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