The Man I Met When I Was Seventeen

He was a dark skinned man
I couldn't tell his age
He had a baby face
But he also had a childlike heart 
He was thin, very thin, mostly bone
His skeleton like figure scared many 
He never scared me 

I visited him a lot
I loved listening to his stories and dreams
Whenever I had no guests around, I was always in his room
He had his own private room
Whereas in my ward we had atleast ten females
I never saw anyone visiting him
I don't think he had family and friends 
He loved to laugh 

I wondered what brought him there
We had big plans of opening the best restaurant in town
At seventeen I knew I had a passion for food
I loved to cook and entertain 
Besides my bedroom, kitchen was my next favourite room
We talked of our passions and made big plans 

I left, I can't remember if I said my goodbyes or not
Its been such a long time
But I remember and treasure our moments
He never left his room, he never even left his bed
But his dreams took him places many wishes to see
I left, he never did
But the dream he put in me still lives on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mwangi Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 6:15 AM
the light disappears when we stop dreaming am glad his dreams took him places and gave you the chance to soar. its wonderful how a kind deed can give hope, water dreams to life....give strength.
Hunjeri Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:25 PM
that's very true. I thank God for that and even thou it was a tough time in my life, I appreciate it now. I just wrote a poem titled "Let Me Jump" and ill be posting it sometime soon. thank you Marion
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 7:59 AM
A wonderful story, very heartfelt and sad, I lost a few friends and they're still very close to my heart and thoughts they never leave you if they meant anything to you a 7 Hugs Eve
Hunjeri Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:23 PM
thank you Eve
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 7:57 AM
??* Happy Birthday to you ??•*¨*•.¸¸ ¸¸.•*¨*•?? Happy Birthday to you ??•*¨*•.¸¸ ¸¸.•*¨*•?? Happy Birthday Dear Njeri ??•*¨*•.¸¸ ¸¸.•*¨*•?? Happy Birthday To You ??•*¨*•.¸¸ Hope your day is filled with much love, laughter & fun surprises!!! ??•*¨*•.¸¸ And many blessings of wisdom, happiness, health, and a lot of wealth
Hunjeri Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Thank you Eve for the bday wishes. God bless
Anish Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Strange how people come in and out of our lives. Nice write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Hunjeri Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:23 PM
very true, and when they leave they sometimes leave big impacts. thank you Mathew
Jones Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:58 AM
A really moving write njeri. Sometimes all we have is a smile and our dreams, worth more than gold, like this poem. Kind regards, Ian
Hunjeri Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:21 PM
thank you Ian
Konos Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:56 AM
This is a vivid wonderful write. There are few to no words that can describe this experience, except coming from you. I thoroughly enjoyed and hope to read more like this from you...Thank you...
Hunjeri Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:21 PM
aww.. thank you Judy
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