The Malkavian - Chapter One - the Embrace - Part One

the alluring subtlety of her curves with each little sway
his basic instincts overflowing from pulsing music and spirits
her attire revealing, leaving little else to the imagination
while her pheromone laced perspiration wafting his way
leads him to eagerly vacate his sedentary position of yearning

his approach stealthy, shadowing her in the rhythmic flailing crowd
her unostentatious heartbeat pulsing ever louder as he draws nearer
discerning her rushing luscious liquid from all others around
changing luminescense reflected in rolling beads of her chest sweat
openly glaring at the flesh confining the valve pumping inside

eyes closed, twirling around, her sensual tornado drawing him in
eyes opened, pivoting stopped, her pursuer's eyes fixated on her
his lavish and sincere visual praising brings about a coy smile
outreached hands taking hold and leading him through the throng
making headway for the exits, her goal the cool, crisp night air

outside the dead night slowly drying up the freshly laid rain
interrupted by the metal on metal clanging sound of the door
protagonist and antagonist, stepping out, hand in hand
their hurried steps implying an itch of a greater magnitude
their hands and lips putting on a public display outside her flat

[ character limit preventing poem from being posted as a single piece - part two quickly forthcoming ]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/10/2014 8:23:00 PM
A very efficient mating ritual Raven, amazing flesh in your words. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/10/2014 6:29:00 PM
Malkavian, my fiance and I read your poem's last night. I had to show you off. LOL, I'm telling you, ever since I ran across your name on this site, I've been sneaking behind you, to see what you've got and so far I'm impressed... :) Truly I am... That's why I invited you to read "The Camarilla" I wanted to see what you thought of the poem... I have to leave in a bit, it was nice tagging you... See ya... Linda
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Date: 6/11/2014 12:50:00 AM
It's not really sneaking if you're blowing up my inbox. ;) But if you're sneaking behind me, just don't put a knife in there, please... doubt you can find room at this stage in my life. :( I rather enjoyed the Camarilla and appreciate being tagged. ;) - Raven
Date: 6/10/2014 6:07:00 PM
Ummmm No NoT All .... I wish I had someone, who enjoyed my twisted poems... Hold on, wait a minute. That's an odd thing to say, I don't write like you, however I wish I did... Do you remember that poet Nathan, he's about the only other twisted writer on this site. I envy him so much. Soon I will envy you... I already said dang... This poet doesn't play...
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Malkavian Raven
Date: 6/10/2014 6:12:00 PM
Oh, Linda... you're killing me with kindness this evening. Definitely going to have to write a dedication piece now. - huge hugs - You're too sweet. - Raven
Date: 6/10/2014 5:54:00 PM
Nope, it's true... The imagery was deep. Like something from a dark romance novel.. From Poe... :) Are you going to write a part 3..
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Date: 6/10/2014 5:55:00 PM
Does my inflated ego make my head look big? ... Abso-tively posi-lutely! - Raven
Date: 6/10/2014 5:46:00 PM
Gripping imagery, I love the story you told. It seems to me that you are an epic poet. The best i've read today.....Thanks for sharing...Linda
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Date: 6/10/2014 5:50:00 PM
Epic? - blushes - Aw shucks, you're just saying that. - hugz - Thank you for your very endearing words. I will try not to disappoint. ;) - Raven
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