The Maiden and the Hunter

Upon the jagged rock,
Where cloven hooves did trot.
A maiden clothed in dock,
Thought life was meant for naught.

Adorned in nature's frock,
Awaiting wind's onslaught.
Ticktock, ticktock, the clock
She dreamed of love a lot.

From China to Bangkok,
Wind brought the storms mascot.
He wished, that young warlock.
The devil's charms besought.

Two footprints stomped bedrock  
Where, dreams remained bethought.
Beneath the black nighthawk,
The maiden heard gunshot.

The hunter drank cognac.
He passed through a sandlot.
Then, met that old warlock.
Good luck was all he sought.

The devil owned the rock.
The maiden's hope was naught.
The hunter could not talk.
The wind's good luck was wrought.

Within the storms airlock,
Those two with Satan fought.
The hawk began to squawk.
The hunter luck was bought. 

Then came the storms windsock.
To waft the dreams besought.
Where love, its coursers walk. 
Her wish was finally wrought.

© May 29, 2011


Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Jack OUT of the Box 
Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 8:31 AM
So clever, I enjoyed it so much and now on to the others
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June 3, 2011 at 8:54 AM
kudos and more for getting out of the box, dane..:) hugggs
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 5:37 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of deb, Dane
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June 3, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Jack Out Of Box" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2011 at 5:20 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! For the honorable mention/.... ***junjun
Song Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Dane Ann- Phew. Writing a ballad looks super difficult! I see through your art/poetry that you are very diversified. I am gonna sit down and read some more of your stuff with a tall cuppa coffee. Hope Miss Carolyn hasn't caught all the jew fish on her expedition.....glad she has a good friend in YOU. Gwendolen
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June 2, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your HM in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry ..enjoy special honor for stepping out of the box ...luv..
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May 30, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Soup Mail! There's a blog on this form Danie...
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