The Magpie and the Butterfly, a Terzanelle

I look out upon a lonely Magpie,
I feel a great stirring deep in my heart,
As he gracefully glides across the sky.

He’s always searching for his other part,
The Butterfly to whom he gave his soul,
I feel a great stirring deep in my heart.

But he does not know that he is still whole,
Even when apart she is still with him,
The Butterfly to whom he gave his soul.

For that’s what love means, it is no whim,
Giving yourself wholly to another,
Even when apart she is still with him.

And the Butterfly is with her lover,
Knowing the greatest gift that one can give,
Giving yourself wholly to another.

My heart is yours for as long as I live,
I look out upon a lonely Magpie,
Knowing the greatest gift that one can give,
As he gracefully glides across the sky.


*Decoding: reading the first line of each stanza  forms a message to my “Magpie” from his “Butterfly” (as does the last ;) )
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Gasun Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear Sharon! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Certainly a challenge with this form. A big congrats for your First place win!
Nair Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Hi Sharon, Congrats on the win with this splendid poem. It must have been real tough, writing a Terzanelle and putting in a message inside!! Jag
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January 26, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Sharon... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win with this beauty! Always, Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Congrad's on your win in this contest it wasn't an easy challenge![I'm pouting I can not see your message :(] Light & Love
Richards Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 9:18 AM
What a terrfic job, decoding your personal message!! Congrats to you!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 8:11 AM
I knew this was a winner, very well done!
Sister Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Congrats on an eloquently written poem. ;)
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 7:32 AM
Ahh!!These take great effort on the writer's part..Enjoyed reading this morning.Thanks for stopping by.Sara
Goff Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 8:08 PM
A loving tribute ..jimbo
Lamoureux Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Fantastic, you took a different form to an even higher level. Great great job.
Harrell Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 2:35 PM
Yes, that's what love is. I think I've been bitten too, lol. Love it, Sharon!
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