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The Magic Potion

It arrived one day by morning post,
     from writing she knew from  foreign coast.
Small seeds packed in two polythene bags,
     had some criss-cross writing with strange tags.
Martha, Brenda two neighbours, close friends,
     cast their wise old eyes to comprehend.
Expert nostrils sniffed for aroma,
      this was beginning of weeks drama!
Books and fables they knew from before,
      of magic potions that help men score!
They nodded their heads in agreement,
      the cure for their men’s predicament!
They soon got their pestle and mortar,
      to brew soup so their men are hotter!
For full five days on till that weekend, 
      the two men were fed medicament....
Result was evident Sunday night,
      when men held them in their big arms tight,
Kissed them goodnight and began to snore,
      men so very pleased with their golf score!

Written 11/August/2020
“Mystery seeds” contest
Sponsor Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 11:33 AM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Krish :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Thanks Anne! Happy to be in honourable mention.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:26 PM
this was VERY fun and creative. Wish I had seen it earlier to let you know it was over the line limit. Congrats. It was a winner.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 10:49 PM
Thanks Andrea. I was concerned about its length but was not sure how the lines are counted. It is nice of you to offer help. Would have been very useful.
Devonshire Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Your entry is good, Krish, but too long for the contest requirements. Best wishes, Carolyn
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 10:45 PM
Thanks Carolyn! I could have shrunk it to 14 lines but the poem would have lost its impact. Pleased it got a mention. Thanks.
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