The Magic of the Oak -Part 3- Collaboration With Chris Green

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And -Part 2-

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_magic_of_the_oak__part_2__collaboration_with_chris_green_919831

 

Enjoy :)

The Magic Of The Oak (Part 3 of 4) A Green and White Production My eyes, roaming free Stared at that oak tree How could a large room it conceal? I saw a small road and water, a boat I'm dreaming, for that can't be real I walked down the lane It started to rain As peppermints fell from the sky In drops pink and white No stranger a sight I stuck out my tongue for a try Behind me the stream, a strawberry dream pink fragrance, so creamy and sweet The chocolate boat stayed neatly afloat with popsicle oars, what a treat! I floated away Not wanting to stay But now wish that I had not gone A picnic you see Was set up for me In front of that tree on the lawn The elves sang a song And I sang along The boat brought me back really quick It loved music, so it went with the flow jam-session with popsicle sticks (To be continued...) *** July 13, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Date: 7/26/2017 2:47:00 PM
Hello Darren I also enjoyed this poetry.I am looking forward to reading more. Have agood my friend.
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Date: 7/16/2017 9:16:00 PM
These poems are a whimsical treat!!
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Date: 7/16/2017 12:40:00 AM
Oh I would like to be at picnic, especially as I have a liking for Popsicle Sticks. Sounds a yummy read Darren and Chris, you've done it again pushing imaginations into the realm of make believe. Love it...Maria
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Darren White
Date: 7/16/2017 1:57:00 AM
Heh yeah, happy you love our little fairy tale.
Date: 7/14/2017 10:26:00 AM
Wow, Darren and Chris, this sounds real yummy:) waiting eagerly for the final part:)
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Darren White
Date: 7/14/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Jo, am really happy you love our little tale :)
Date: 7/13/2017 4:38:00 PM
a magical tale . beautifully done Darren and Chris
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Darren White
Date: 7/14/2017 2:05:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, so glad you like it :)
Date: 7/13/2017 2:39:00 PM
This is a so fun to read. Looking forward to more :)
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Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Heidi. It was fun to write also :)
Date: 7/13/2017 1:07:00 PM
Imaginative! And the imagery is great. Can't wait for part 4. - Dean
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Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 2:19:00 PM
Love it that you like our fairy tale so much :)
Date: 7/13/2017 11:39:00 AM
I love all three parts, can't wait to see more :)
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Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 12:18:00 PM
One more, tomorrow. Glad you enjoy this, Lenna :)
Date: 7/13/2017 11:32:00 AM
Love this so much it is so musical sounding , Darren & Chris.
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Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve :)
Date: 7/13/2017 11:25:00 AM
haha...I loved it...great imagination
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Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 12:16:00 PM
It's a blessing to have a boundless imagination :)
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