The Magic In Friends

Take my hand, as we walk this magic land.
Travelling together down the long road,
Full of gold, till we get old.

We will always have one another to hold,
Because we will not fold.
 Even when it gets cold.

These lives shared because we cared.
We were not scared.
Even when we did not dare,
to breathe in the cold air.

When I could not bare anymore,
You led me to the magic land by the hand.
Where we took a stand, 
not sure where we would land.

We could have been banned,
 for making this last stand.
But there is magic in this strange land, 
as we walk, hand in hand.

Gypsy of Essence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/18/2013 10:03:00 AM
I thought the ending was quite sweet... almost implying the reason for all the magic was simply because you had someone to imagine it with you. Also thanks for stopping to by read my stuff... it's much appreciated!
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Date: 3/12/2013 10:15:00 AM
Friends are worth more than gold, you captured the magic of friendship here....lovely! Hugs
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Gypsyof Essence
Date: 3/13/2013 4:40:00 AM
I wrote this thinking of my best friend ;D thank you for stopping by
Date: 2/26/2013 4:02:00 AM
It's always nice to have someone that walks beside you. I really like this poem.
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Gypsyof Essence
Date: 3/13/2013 4:38:00 AM
Yes it is good to have someone to walk with, I am fortunate to have a lovely friend like this. thanks for stopping by :)
Date: 2/25/2013 8:02:00 AM
magic and so beautiful
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Gypsyof Essence
Date: 3/13/2013 4:36:00 AM
thank you :D
Date: 2/22/2013 5:19:00 PM
this reads like a magic little fairy tale, Gypsy!! Nice to meet you here.
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Gypsyof Essence
Date: 3/13/2013 4:34:00 AM
Nice to meet you as well. thanks :)
Date: 2/22/2013 1:31:00 PM
A real smooth collaboration Gypsy - I enjoy the rhyme too - I've been searching for that magic mortal to inspire with for a long time - J.A.B. %
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Gypsyof Essence
Date: 3/13/2013 4:31:00 AM
yes it was fun to write!! :)Thank you ;D
Date: 2/22/2013 1:12:00 PM
Glad you have found the magic! Thank-you for stopping by my writes. Light & Love
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Gypsyof Essence
Date: 3/13/2013 4:26:00 AM
Your poems were a delight to read, and Thank YOU for stopping by :)
Date: 2/22/2013 2:30:00 AM
This is a very well written poem Gypsy, I'm glad that I chose your poem today. - Bravo! - Have a beautiful day! - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Gypsyof Essence
Date: 3/13/2013 4:15:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read this poem :D
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