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The Magic Hour

Dawn's Stillness Invites me Vermillion hills Clouds' engulfing tangerine stillness crests Tension sloughs, blows away like old snakeskin Desert rain scent Cleansing me Pedal Flow Smile Conceals Morning’s ride Heart's treasure trove Work’s gray walls can't touch my bright turquoise glow 7/18/16 © by Author Contest: Triple Tetractys 2 Sponsor: Eve Roper Syllable count confirmed at howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 7/28/2016 10:26:00 AM
Nice images. Feels good when you have that happy, satisfied, positive feeling!
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Date: 7/27/2016 5:49:00 PM
Forgot the rating...and yes, this poem should have placed much higher, I think..
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/27/2016 6:09:00 PM
Thanks...not sweating that. Fun to write.
Date: 7/27/2016 5:48:00 PM
Such creative lines in your well written poem, Tom! I especially liked "tension sloughs, blows away like old snakeskin...: superb! 7
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/27/2016 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 7/25/2016 3:01:00 PM
Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/27/2016 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/22/2016 6:03:00 PM
gosh, I was counting the syllables to see why you could possibly have placed lower than third place. But all looks fine technically. this is one of the more mature ones in the presentation of your message of beautiful joy.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/27/2016 6:07:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 7/19/2016 6:11:00 AM
A colorful gem Tom! Best of luck in the contest. : ) 7
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/19/2016 6:31:00 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 7/19/2016 6:09:00 AM
Reminds me of a morning ride in the beautiful outdoors before heading into work. Great images.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/19/2016 6:32:00 AM
Precisely! Bikeotherapy. :-)