The Lying Truth

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*Image of Truth Lies Philosophy by Pixabay. The Lying Truth Stiff tongues pangs if sour truth take root, lapsed lying lips cured make sweeter fruit. 2021 December 11 *3rd Place* Bite-Size Poem #31 ~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2022 January 12

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/12/2022 8:50:00 PM

Great truth. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/12/2022 10:07:00 PM

Thanks, Christuraj, thoughtfulness defines you! Stay safe my friend, Aloha!

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2022 9:35:00 AM

Delightful euphony, William ~

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/12/2022 12:07:00 PM

Thanks aplenty, Line, a delightful pleasure, truly honored my friend, Aloha!

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/22/2021 12:51:00 PM

Truer lips William, easy to say yet harder to find Smooth fly lies today; glib from evils crib' Brash rash bold lies, amidst flying time and Calculated mimes.' Pleased I read today.'

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/22/2021 5:17:00 PM

Elvis? Wait--glasses off. An admirable honing of carved words, Joe. I enjoyed your penetrative critiques and thensome my friend, Aloha!